Post #915469

Author: Darth Lucas
Parent topic: Get ready for "Star Wars - Shroud of the Sith", a radical fan edit of "The Phantom Menace"
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/915469/action/topic#915469
Date created: 9-Mar-2016, 2:12 AM

I would suggest removing the Palpatine shot entirely. Move the dooku shot to after “…master, or the apprentice?”
Then re-use the wide shot of everyone standing around the funeral pyre for the ending shot. Maybe find some appropriate music to blend in that grandly swells up to the end if you can find something that works.