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Post #915152

Author
Sheepish
Parent topic
Get ready for "Star Wars - Shroud of the Sith", a radical fan edit of "The Phantom Menace"
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Date created
7-Mar-2016, 7:09 PM

Okay, here’s a little preview of what I’m doing with Dooku. It needs to be touched up a bit, and the final scene with Palpatine’s face hasn’t been color-corrected, but this is mostly just a frame of reference.

https://vimeo.com/158102839 (password is “fanedit”)

Suggestions? Ideas?

Do you like the way it’s ordered, or is there anything I can do to improve on it? I was considering putting Dooku’s walkaway after Mace’s “but which was destroyed…master or apprentice?” line, but it felt like slight overkill to have Dooku walkaway and immediately cut to the pan from Anakin to Palpatine. I’m still not sure.