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Post #911167

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Lord Haseo
Parent topic
The Force Awakens : Fan Edit Ideas
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Date created
23-Feb-2016, 12:02 PM

MalàStrana said:
If possible it would be cool to remove the inappropriate and unfunny humor (especially during Poe/Ren scenes)

Even Reti4 liked that…

the ridiculous “fan service” elements “oh, you’re General Han Solo !”

Did you miss the point of that interaction? Rey believes that Han was a smuggler and Finn believes he was a General. It established that where you live in the Galaxy determines what your view on history is. It’s not fanservice at all; it’s something we call world building.

and most of “Jar Jar” Finn characterisation (this character is so stupid… why isn’t he killed ?)

This has the sweaty smell of 4chan all over it.

The same goes with the line establishing that stormtroopers are conditioned kids who hence don’t join the Empire by choice.

Why? Just why?

his terrible line “Chewie, we are home” is also something to definitely cut

I mean I have problems with the film and in general I tend to nitpick but you’re trying way WAY too hard to find faults with the film

Saddly it seems impossible to cut the terrible “Rey’s Jedi Mind Trick found in your magic pocket because the script needs you to use it now” scene

Can’t you kids wait until Rey’s full origins are reveled before jumping to conclusions? Is that too much to ask for?

Most of Kylo Donald Duck Ren characterisation should also be removed in order to let the main villain look like a real threat and not a whining piece of shit kid who’s mad a his parents for grounding him.

Very potent meme my friend.

On a serious note Kylo Ren’s violent outbursts distinguishes him from every Dark Sider we’ve seen thus far and makes perfect sense considering he hasn’t completed his training in the Dark Side so he wouldn’t know how to reserve his anger for times it can be used more effectively. Furthermore, his outbursts makes him seem more unpredictable which adds a level of fear that can’t be attributed to the cold and calculating Darth Vader.

The deleted scene explaining the political background really needs to be reinstalled.

I have been purposefully avoiding any details on the deleted scenes until I saw them in person but if a scene such as this was deleted it needs to be reimplemented into the film for sure.