Well, it’s “heavy” Lucas at his best 😃 For instance the Obi-Wan/Dooku scene of EpII: taken independently the lines aren’t that terrible, but as a whole it has absolutely no sense (Dooku gives away every single information needed to stop the Sith plot ?!?). The same goes with Jango “I’m just a simple man, trying to make my way in the universe”, still don’t get how it is supposed to be a reply to “Your clones are very impressive. You must be very proud.” (Tumera Morrison is nevertheless very good as Jango, he does what he can with Lucas lines).

(and I looooooove Padmé mother’s “They didn’t tell us it was so serious !” whereas there had been an assassination attempt killing 7 people just the day before that she knows about…)

I like what you’ve done with Yoda and Windu (and Jar Jar): it’s still not golden age cinema, but at least they notably sound less dull.