Looks pretty good. I was thinking the crawl would be a rebuilt one like Harmy’s 1977 one. But this was 35mm sourced? There’s a little bit of dirt here and there over the crawl and starfield, but nothing bad.
But what’s a little more distracting is the motion of the crawl. Is that jitteriness of the text, but not the starfield present in the 1981 version? It might be hard to tell in TN1’s example since the stars aren’t easily visible. It just seems a little more vigorous than normal gate weave, but I could be wrong. Just wondering if it needs more stabilization. Anyway, it looks very nice for something sourced from film!