Post #905057

Author: Darth Lucas
Parent topic: Smithers' Prequel Fanedits (a Work In Progress)
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/905057/action/topic#905057
Date created: 6-Feb-2016, 3:10 PM

I’m sorry I really don’t mean to be rude but that really doesn’t work (at least for me) at all.
As silly as “Nooooooo!!!” is, at least it’s a reaction. I don’t buy that Obi wan would have next to no reaction just standing there watching his mentor and best friend cut down in front of him, only getting silently, slowly pissed off. Him not really reacting kind of adds to the blandness of his character.
I get what you were going for, but I don’t think it works very well.