I have watched a few scenes (sorry I didn’t take notes of where the framerate is problematic, but still I noticed some issues around 0:11’04 and during the duel of the fates). About your edit choices themselves, you aimed at a fast-paced movie, so I guess it works to your taste, though I believe that sometimes you rush things too much and that inoffensive bits are hard to remove without audio issues (the same goes with L8 version, especially for the arrival on Coruscant). You’ve nicely removed the Podrace announcers. I like the working on the pod sequence as well.