Yeah the title styles I wasn’t sure about. I was really into the colors, but specifically the font, idk, the edit succeeded enough on it’s own that the font felt maybe/sort of like a mere gimmick. But I’m not sure what other font would fit.
I agree this arrangement of scenes would likely work as a more standard fanedit, using the normal music and titles, but the tone would change drastically and I don’t know if it would keep the gravity it has as it currently is. Also maybe I’m still in the dazzled stage and can’t be objective. I’ve watched it twice already.