I have made some WIP edits of the scenes in AOTC. Check them out here https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B5Kx80VdTyyocGtCSFh5MFVZcmM . The cuts I’ve talked about would be the videos named “she’s in pain” and “Tattoine rough cut” (which would be at the very end of the movie).
Regarding ROTS, I think that with some re arrangement it could work. There are lines that could have a new or different meaning and could collaborate with the idea, such as “something is happening, I’m not the jedi I should be” (because he realises he shouldn’t feel tempted).
You, sir, got a legitimate chuckle out of me with your ‘friend helping a friend’ scene! Nicely done!