I’d remove the joke about Finn not understanding Han’s nod to look behind him. That’s one thing I felt was a little too dumb.
I think they just made it last too long. I got the joke the millisecond they started it, and thought it was well done. But then, inexplicably, it seemed to drag on interminably. Like, how many head nods do you guys need here to complete this scene? It isn’t a gag that needs an extended pantomime sequence to play out, they could have done it in the time it took Boyega to speak his line. It’s funny how a few milliseconds can be the difference between nailing the joke and trashing it.
Or rather… NOT funny, if you know what I mean.
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