The only issue I had with the film was the weird informal nature of the end of the crawl. When it says ‘whereabouts’ - it threw me a little.
Would have been more fitting for it to use the word ‘location’
Post #897670
- Author
- SteveE
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- The Force Awakens : Fan Edit Ideas
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- Date created
- 16-Jan-2016, 3:05 PM