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In-progress edit of The Phantom Menace
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List of Changes:
- Renamed Movie to Naboo Deception
- Changed Opening Crawl
- Beginning of the movie is quicker and action-er (is that the right word?)
- Cut dialogue between droids
- Queen Amidala’s voice is more squeaky
- Jedi’s now use short-range teleport on the Droid Control Ship, not Force Speed
- Removed Obi-Wan’s line “The negotiations were short”
- Removed several scenes of Gunray on the ship
- Removed scene of Gunray informing the droids about Jedi
- Trimmed Jar Jar Binks’s dialogue
- Removed Jar Jar’s salto into the water
- Trimmed in-between droid conversation
- Shortened entrance to Gunga City
- Shortened dialogue between Qui-Gon and Gungan leader
- Removed most of the in-unobongo scenes while travelling to Naboo
- Trimmed Gunray’s dialogue to Amidala
- Greatly trimmed Jar Jar’s stupid shit during the movie
- Added one-liner to Obi-Wan when ambushing the droids to compensate for Jar Jar: “Let’s throw these girls a Jedi surprise party”
- Removed scene of Qui-Gon throwing two droids at a wall
- Shortened dialogue after droids are taken care off
- Trimmed dialogue between Qui-Gon and Droid in Hangar
- Removed Jar Jar scenes during the escape
- Removed R2D2 being named and commended
- Removed dialogue between Jar Jar and Padmé
- Removed all scenes with Darth Sidious
- Removed Jar Jar stepping in shit
- Trimmed slapstick in Watto’s shop
- Anakin’s surname isn’t said anymore throughout the movie
- Removed mention of Watto being imunne to mind tricks because of his race
- Removed “Yipee” and trimmed dialogue between Ani and Watto
- C3PO isn’t reffered by name anymore, nor was he built by Ani
- Trimmed dinner room dialogue
- Removed “ITS WORKING, ITS WORKINGGGG”
- Removed all dialogue spoken by kids on Tatooine
- Anakin isn’t a virgin birth, but a non-marital birth.
- Added backdrop music to the hangar scenes
- Shortened the pod race greatly
- Less in-pod views during the race
- No announcer interruptions during the race
- Removed slapstick during race
- Added up-beat music to the pod-race
- Removed Jabba the Hutt
- Trimmed Anakin’s dialogues with Shmi after winning pod race
- Removed Anakin talking to C3PO when packing his stuff
- Re-added a deleted scene to explain why Qui-Gon and Ani are running
- Trimmed all scenes on Coruscant
- Removed mentions of midichlorians
- Removed scene on Anakin being tested, to keep it mystery how Jedi order works.
- Removed line about Anakin being too old
- Gungan Leader now rejects Naboo when they ask him for help
- Radically trimmed Gungan VS Droid battle
- Anakins actions during finale are no longer accidents, but deliberate
- Trimmed space battle
- Darth Maul duel was pieced together, and in turn, made faster and more exciting
- Obi-Wan kills Darth Maul quicker
- Trimmed dialogue between Padmé and Gunray
- Trimmed the ending celebration
Digitally replaced every character with Jar Jar Binks
