Here is my ideal crawl. Its a bit long, but adds some background, and a sense of urgency.
The light of the force is waning, Luke Skywalker the last Jedi has vanished. The remnant’s shadow, the radicalized FIRST ORDER has seized the opportunity, and will not rest until Skywalker, the soul of a now stagnate republic, is destroyed.
General, Leia Organa, leads a brave RESISTANCE in the wake of indifference and fear. She is desperate to find her brother Luke and gain his help in restoring peace and justice to the galaxy.
Leia has sent her most daring pilot on a secret mission to Jakku, where an old ally has discovered a clue to Luke’s whereabouts….