This is pretty good. I’d only think to add something about how they’re all searching for Luke. Leaving it out might cause a bit of confusion as to the first few scenes.
Post #894643
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- cruel1079
- Parent topic
- Rewritten Crawl for The Force Awakens
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/894643/action/topic#894643
- Date created
- 8-Jan-2016, 1:47 PM