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Post #892425

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thejediknighthusezni
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SPOILERS Rewrite The Force Awakens
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2-Jan-2016, 2:20 AM
   ...continued     "I don't know what this 'Logistics' is, but I want some of it."

  MF goes over surface then up and pursued by TIES. FINN notices ship is transmitting and Rey says it's old  transponder she can't shut off. Jump to hyperspace then they go to fix problems. Rey says MF is a ship shot down during the battle of Jakku. Finn says "The Alliance made this a warship?" Rey says it was back when they were still called The Rebellion. Shut off transponder too late, super destroyer warps in and slow reveal of the enormity of it as tracter pulls it into a side bay. Hide in smuggling compartments. Get out. Poe's ship there. Finn, Rey, and BB8 go running around the innards of the ship. Finn uses knowledge of systems to get around and get some spare armor. Rey is captured and taken for interrogation. Finn goes to get Poe. Finn says noble reasons, Poe says you need a pilot. Finn says have to get Rey, Poe says he has a mission. As restraints removed Poe says you got away, then you are dragged back, then you release me, just as your friend is captured. Do you ever feel you are moving and making no forward progress? Finn says that's been every moment of his life. Poe gets sack and told it's the only way to move around ship. Kylo accuses Rey of having seen the map and demands that she imagines it in her mind, gets into Rey's head and triggers flashes of memory that confuses both of them. Rey shakes as he keeps pressing into her head, then suddenly they see flashes of Kylo's memories, both confused, then Rey takes a deep breath and concentrates on Kylo's mind then tells him his darkest secrets. Confused and upset Kylo leaves. Finn and Poe make way toward Rey in armor.