Can't resist.
I'll try to stay as close as possible to the original storyline and characterizations.
THE FORCE AWAKENS: RECONSIDERED
CIVIL WAR! THE GALAXY HAS FALLEN INTO CHAOS OVER THE DECADES SINCE THE EMPIRE FELL AT THE BATTLE OF ENDOR. WHILE CRIMINAL CARTELS AND SEPERATIST MOVEMENTS PULL APART, THE ALLIANCE OF FREE WORLDS CLASHES WITH THE EVIL FIRST ORDER OF THE IMPERIAL TYRANNY TO REESTABLISH GALACTIC GOVERNMENT. THE ORDER, CONTROLLED BY SUPREME LEADER SNOKE WITH THE KINGHTS OF REN, HAS ORDERED IT'S BATTLEFLEET TO CEASE FROM RAVAGING THE MOST HELPLESS WORLDS OF THE ALLIANCE TO PURSUE A MAP TO THE LOCATION OF THE LEGENDARY JEDI KNIGHT, LUKE SKYWALKER, WHO IS RUMORED TO HAVE FOUND THE SECRET TO ULTIMATE POWER THROUGH THE MYSTICAL ENERGY FIELD OF THE FORCE.
LEIA I, QUEEN OF THE ALLIANCE WORLD NEW ALDARAAN AND THE SISTER OF JEDI SKYWALKER, HAS DISPATCHED THE BEST PILOT OF THE ALLIANCE TO OBTAIN THE MAP BEFORE THE ORDER ARRIVES. THE ALLIANCE PILOT RACES TO ESCAPE THE WORLD JAKKU AND RETURN WITH THE INFORMATION THAT MIGHT HELP SAVE THE DESPERATE ALLIANCE...
We see a star destroyer and an X fighter coming up from a desert planet pursued by 15-20 TIEs swarming like bees. The super star destroyer and TIEs are painted with red and black political and ideological insignia( Uniform and trooper armor are too) We see TIE pilots and xpilot but not clearly. We see Kylo in a TIE all over the xwing and it's damaged. In x cockpit we see display with upload bars then a display by BB with a download bars. The xwing swoops down over the surface of Jakku and BB8 drops out the bottom and the x speeds back up into orbit pursued by the TIEs. The x is damaged more and falls into tractor beam of super destroyer. Maybe distance shot of Rey watching the battle with electro binoculars.
We see BB8 make way through desert have encounters with creatures. We see Rey scavenging. We see Poe interrogated Kylo accuses Poe of seeing the map and demands he imagines it in his mind so Kylo can read thoughts and a certain trooper with a little bit different insignia on armor looking and told to take and search Poe's jacket. BB meets Rey and they travel back to settlement dangers in the desert. Troopers ordered to surface to search for droid. Rey sells parts gets food goes to see friend at ship restoration shop we see a few ships but not MF. little alien friend at shop recognizes BB but signals droid to stay quiet. Friend sends Rey and droid away as 3 searching troopers approach. Troopers decide to kill friend and others because they know too much and aren't helping. Odd trooper argues and is arrested and to be sent back for interrogation. Odd trooper runs and firing goes into desert and takes off armor and pulls Poe's jacket out of backpack. Rey and Finn meet back in settlement Finn says noble reasons and Rey says he needs her help. Chased by troopers. They make way back to friend's ship shop friend tells them to take a ship and hands Rey a lightsaber and says found it in a salvaged ship. Troopers chasing and not the garbage ship then the garbage ship. Rey says helped restore MF and has flown it. Finn asks you've flown this? Rey tentative little "Yeeah" Finn worried repeating "Yeeeeaaaahhh?!?"