I don’t mean to sound rude here… but if you create a trailer for a fan edit, it should ideally show what sets your edit apart from the main films. That trailer comes across more as a weird sequence of scenes, too much dialogue, reusing existing trailers from TPM/AotC, and throwing a TFA trailer themed score on top with jarring existing music.

In hindsight, it may be rather redundant to make a trailer for a fan edit if the core story is the same and you’re rearranging/cutting scenes.
Actually, the best ‘trailer’ you can do is simply making a changelist of what you’re doing in the edit.