Honestly the only changes I would make are some subtle trims to a few bits of humor that felt unnecessary to me. And that’s not even all the humor. Other than that I thought it was pretty much fantastic.
You sir are spot on.
i also agree with this as well. As far as the destruction of the Hosnian (sp?) system goes, i would also have to agree that it would be better served as happening at the end of the movie.
the only other things i would change are some of the unnecessary call backs, such as Leia mentioning the death star. some of these moments seemed a bit forced (no pun intended).
i would also have to agree with the R2D2 bits. there is absolutely no reason for him to come out of his robot depression. instead just have him be asleep for the entire movie until the end when they need him. you could even keep the lines from 3P0, telling BB8 that R2 is in low power mode. then when they walk away he wakes up revealing that he does in fact have the rest of the map and can help.