Minor request, would you be willing to remove the line “This creep is gonna end up deep fried”. That line has always bothered me. Also can you explain the motivation for the “I’ve been dying each day since you came back into life” line? I don’t even understand what that’s supposed to mean, especially in the context of this edit.
Post #885950
- Author
- Octorox
- Parent topic
- Star Wars Episode II: The Approaching Storm (Released)
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/885950/action/topic#885950
- Date created
- 14-Dec-2015, 11:39 PM