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Post #885741

Author
Hal 9000
Parent topic
Star Wars Episode II: The Approaching Storm (Released)
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Date created
14-Dec-2015, 11:53 AM

towne32 said:

I agree with the decision to use the family scene.

Also, didn’t you tweak end of the kitchen dialogue recently to make it a little more bearable?

I took Octorox’s advice in silencing the line, “Our relationship is strictly professional.”
I had already removed, “It’s obvious he has feelings for you,” and shortened the mother’s reaction shot.