I think letting owen and beru finish their scene first would work better, then maybe cut to an establishing shot of the homestead. Ideally the way I see the scene play out in my head, would be a shot of the homestead from a distance and a speeder comes into frame. Biggs jumps off and you’d here the two of them greeting one another. Specifically the lines you used from the scene inside tosche station. Then then wipe or fade, to show an elapse of time, to the part of the deleted scene where biggs says “I’ve missed you kid.”

The dialog prior to that part is entertaining and I’d hate to lose it, but i think with the robot going across the scene and them jumping down from the ledge it just doesn’t fit with the homestead’s landscape. Plus the shorter the scene the less rotoscoping is needed if you wanted to go as far as taking out the background to match the homestead scenery.

Also does anyone know if there was ever a score written for the biggs/ luke deleted scene, that could be added back in?

maybe you could use the part at the very end of the scene of biggs walking away. flip biggs so he is walking back toward luke and move it to the beginning of the scene. I dunno just throwing anything i have at it. I wish I could help with the work in some way, I have experience with video editing and effects, but its been years, not to mention, like I said, I don’t have the software or a capable computer.