RonSolo, you have a PM.
I think we’re going to give this a shot. The only criticisms I had of the sample were low recording level (-12dB peaks) and slow pacing. This sort of voiceover is generally pretty brisk, not a leisurely storytelling pace, probably so that it squeezes more easily between the dialogue and sound effects in the film itself. Even for the crawl, you want to get the words out quickly, because the John Williams score is the real attraction of the first few minutes.