It would probably be better if the slogan was not so... embittered. I believe that an ideal slogan should be a subtle attack on the foolish notion that the originals simply "don't exist", rather than a direct attack on Lucas or some puerile remark like those you have suggested. The slogan needs to be attention grabbing, yet clever-the Han Shot First shirts are a good example. BTW, is there any relation between Scott and Gary Kurtz?