Post #85463

Author: Darth Chaltab
Parent topic: my new scifi story gallery!
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/85463/action/topic#85463
Date created: 10-Jan-2005, 4:26 PM

My sentence structure really sucks.... So, if you must critique it, go easy on me there, since I allready know.