I did notice a typo on it after I uploaded it. "As you wish?" should be "As you wish."
I started with MagnoliaFan's subtitles, and went through them. When I found something I thought I should change, I looked at your version to see if it was any better. If so, I used that. If not, I came up with something new.
I decided to *not* have Jar Jar think he saved Qui Gon's life. Just seemed like a stretch to me. And when there were parts (like Sebulba and Watto) that were already subtitled, I kept them mostly the same.