Hey, excuse me for not having comented before've been a little busy these days. It's a great start for Act 3, Carima has convinced Fordala to help with the mission and to rescue Skywalker, Nellith understands the situation and knows that to win the war, the Jedi must be brought to the front lines and Skywalker and Crayde have a nice talk. And I liked the idea that Crayde want to create a clone of Skywalker. I look forward to see the next part.
Post #794096
- Author
- DLoomys
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- CWBorne’s Prequel Treatment Omnibus Thread (Current Work: Revisions & Edits)
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- 19-Oct-2015, 5:55 PM