For now, I only read the opening crawl and a little every page, I have to read it all, but what I read from the opening crawl seems quite interesting.
But only three things:
First, could you put the date on which the episode occurs?
Second, describe a little more physically (hair style, hair color, eye color, etc) the main characters and supporting characters and their ages (you know, instead of saying a young Obi-Wan Kenobi or an a teenager Anakin, you could put an Obi-Wan of thirty years or something like that).
And third, you could put in bold the names of the characters? You know, to make it easier to read and differentiate who speaks.
That's all for now, when I read it completely, I will give a fuller comment.