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Star Wars Episode 1: A False Dawn
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14-Oct-2015, 1:33 PM

INT. INFINITY LANCE, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Anakin nods as he leaves the explosions in his wake.

                                   FRIGATE CAPTAIN (O.S.)

                         Thanks for that. We need to take

                         out the shields on this destroyer

                         or we'll never bring her down. And

                         I think you're just the pilot for

                         it.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Happy to help, ma'am.

                                   FRIGATE CAPTAIN (O.S.)

                         The shield generator's located on

                         top of the ship, about halfway

                         between bow and stern. We'll send

                         you the targeting data now.

                                   ANAKIN

                         No good, ma'am, the Lance isn't

                         equipped for that sort of thing,

                         but I'll find it, I promise.

                                   FRIGATE CAPTAIN (O.S.)

                         The target's miniscule, and

                         practically invisible -- if you're

                         off by an inch...

                                   ANAKIN

                         Then, it's a good thing you're

                         sending a Jedi.

               Anakin pulls back on the stick.

                                   ANAKIN (CONT'D)

                             (to himself)

                         You sound like an idiot.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The Lance jets up and out of sight, climbing high into space,

               leaving the battle far behind.

               INT. REPUBLIC FRIGATE, HELM - CONTINUOUS

               The captain strains to see Anakin's departing fighter.

                                   REPUBLIC TECH OFFICER

                         Where's he going?

               The captain just shakes her head.

               EXT. ALDERAAN, BATTLE FIELD - CONTINUOUS

               Canaris helps a wounded Jedi to his feet with one hand, while

               deflecting laser fire with the other.

                                   CANARIS

                         On your feet now. It's almost over.

               The Jedi nods back with appreciation and determination. As

               Canaris returns the nod, he spies, well behind the wounded

               Jedi, Donzin Faal.

               Faal duels another Jedi. Pulling him violently in with the

               Force, Faal grabs him by the throat and raises him off his

               feet. A quick snap, and Faal discards the limp body.

               Canaris sneers, and begins cutting his way toward Faal. Faal

               notices Canaris just as the Jedi is encircled by a unit of

               clones.

               Canaris returns the stare and clears away the pack of

               surrounding clones with a violent blast of Force energy.

                                   CANARIS (CONT'D)

                         Donzin Faal!

                                   FAAL

                         Jardin Canaris, my old comrade.

                                   CANARIS

                         I call you to account!

                                   FAAL

                         I do not recognize your authority.

                                   CANARIS

                         You will submit or you will die.

                         The murder of our master will not

                         go unpunished.  

                                   FAAL

                         We shall see.

               Faal grips his lighstaber in both hands and runs at Canaris.

               Canaris runs toward Faal, and then their lightsabers meet in

               a flash of light.

               Canaris and Faal trade blows, the rapidity of their strikes

               gradually increasing beyond human capabilities. A massive

               swing from Faal drives Canaris to his knees and sends him

               sliding back a dozen feet, until he comes to a stop against a

               small mound of upturned earth.

               Faal roars, and Canaris shakes it off. 

                                   CANARIS

                         Why did you do it, Donzin? He took

                         you in. Sheltered you, trained you,

                         trusted you. I trusted you.

                                   FAAL

                         Had he not, I may never have been

                         able to destroy him.

                                   CANARIS

                         But why? To what end?

                                   FAAL

                         The Dark Side called, and I obeyed.

                                   CANARIS

                         Can evil be so simple?

                                   FAAL

                         So very simple. And so very

                         powerful.

                                   CANARIS

                         I'll kill you!

               Canaris leaps into the air, closing the entire distance

               between them, and brings his lightsaber down heavily.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The Infinity Lance climbs high into the stars, leaving the

               battle and Rohn's ship far below.

               INT. INFINITY LANCE, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Anakin takes a breath.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Okay. Here we go.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The Lance stalls, rolls, and dives straight down.

               INT. ROHN'S SHIP, HOLO-COMMUNICATION DECK - CONTINUOUS

               Rohn kneels before the giant display of the High Suzerain's

               bust, still framed as to obscure our view.

                                   ROHN

                         We are defeated, High Suzerain. My

                         failure is total.

                                   HIGH SUZERAIN PRIME

                         Your failures are mine, brother.

                                   ROHN

                         The Jedi, they...

                                   HIGH SUZERAIN PRIME

                         I understand.

                                   ROHN

                         Was this not foreseen?

                                   HIGH SUZERAIN PRIME

                         No. Yes. I do not know. Perhaps I

                         have failed to divine the greater

                         design of the Dark Side.

                                   ROHN

                         I have instructed my forces to

                         fight to the death. What are your

                         instructions for me?

                                   HIGH SUZERAIN PRIME

                         The very same. Make your way to the

                         castle. Kill the king and queen of

                         Alderaan. This first blow may yet

                         sting. I pity you that you shall

                         not see what will follow.

                                   ROHN

                         As you command. It is enough that

                         you will see it. My eyes are yours,

                         my lord, my brother, my... father.

               With that, we finally see the face of the High Suzerain. It

               is Rohn's.

                                   HIGH SUZERAIN PRIME

                         Die well, my son.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The Falling Star speeds toward the formation of frigates and

               Rohn's destroyer.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               The view from the cockpit clearly illustrates the Republic's

               firepower deficit. The frigates can only manage superficial

               damage.

               Another frigate goes down.

                                   KITCH

                         Blast it, she's tough.

                                   MANX

                         And no way we're boarding her in

                         the middle of this mess.

                                   KITCH

                         That sounds like a dare to m--

                                   MANX

                         Wait, what's that?

               A faint red beam has appeared atop the destroyer shooting 

               straight up into space. It begins to increase in brightness

               and concentration.

                                   KITCH

                         Skywalker.

               INT. INFINITY LANCE, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Behind Anakin's closed lids, his eyes roll side to side.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The Lance dives, dives, dives, executing a slow, graceful

               pirouette -- the particle beam unerring. Rohn's ship is just

               a speck below, but growing larger.

               INT. REPUBLIC FRIGATE, HELM - CONTINUOUS

               The tech officer can't believe what he's seeing.

                                   REPUBLIC TECH OFFICER

                         He's right on it, ma'am. Twenty

                         kilometers out and right on it.

                                   REPUBLIC FRIGATE CAPTAIN

                             (under her breath)

                         Come on, kid.

               INT. ROHN'S SHIP, PASSAGEWAY - CONTINUOUS

               Rohn thunders down a corridor, a unit of elite clones falling

               in behind him from an adjoining passageway. A hatch hisses

               open in front of him, revealing a massive hangar bay.

               INT. ROHN'S SHIP, HANGAR BAY - CONTINUOUS

               Ships launch, soldiers and crew scurry to and fro, but all

               who find themselves in Rohn's path clear the way and stand at

               attention. The line of clones on either side of Rohn and his

               personal guard frame his destination -- a jet-black cruiser.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The Lance continues its dive. Far below, the beam terminates

               mere inches above the exterior of Rohn's ship. The otherwise

               invisible shield begins to glow at the point of impact.

               As the Lance draws closer, some wreckage obstructs its

               vector. It maneuvers easily around the debris.

               INT. INFINITY LANCE, COCKPIT - COCKPIT

               Anakin's eyes are still closed and his face serene, even as

               he dodges debris.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The particle beams sways off target ever so slightly, this

               way and that, as the Lance avoids wreckage. As it does, the

               termination point of the beam jumps significantly farther

               from hull of the ship, demarcating for us the shape of the

               shield and highlighting the tininess of the target.

               Above, the Lance passes through the debris field.

               INT. REPUBLIC FRIGATE, HELM - CONTINUOUS

               The tech officer's eyes are glued to the holographics.

                                   REPUBLIC TECH OFFICER

                         Enemy shields failing, ma'am. He's

                         punching through.

                                   FRIGATE CAPTAIN

                         All frigates, discontinue cannonade

                         and ready for a salvo.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The shields of Rohn's destroyer glow red hot at the point of

               impact and then flash a brilliant white. 

               INT. ROHN'S SHIP, PASSAGEWAY - CONTINUOUS

               Clones scatter as the particle beam drills a whole in the

               ceiling and tears through the floor.

               INT. ROHN'S SHIP, HANGAR BAY - CONTINUOUS

               Rohn's cruiser and a small fighter escort take off as the

               Lance's particle beam shoots through the cavernous hangar

               like a thin red column, destroying an outbound fighter craft.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The Lance is almost on top of Rohn's ship now, the beam

               cutting straight through the behemoth.

               INT. REPUBLIC FRIGATE, HELM - CONTINUOUS

               The tech officer turns to face the captain.

                                   REPUBLIC TECH OFFICER

                         Shields down!

                                   REPUBLIC FRIGATE CAPTAIN

                         Fire!

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The Falling Star flies over the formation of frigates as they

               unleash a simultaneous barrage of artillery. Explosions tear

               at the structure of the dark destroyer.

               The Star too fires a broadside, generating the largest

               explosion yet and breaking the destroyer's back.

               INT. INFINITY LANCE, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Anakin's eyes snap open and he releases the trigger. Rohn's

               ship rushes toward him, explosions rocking its starboard

               side. Anakin jerks the controls hard.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The Infinity Lance buzzes the port side of Rohn's ship as

               fire bursts through the hull from the interior. 

               INT. INFINITY LANCE, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Anakin looks over his shoulder as he continues his dive,

               Rohn's ship disintegrating behind him.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Wooohoooohoo!

               Facing front again, Anakin sees Rohn's cruiser. His face

               falls. He senses something dark, disturbing. His fear and

               revulsion turn to determination.

               INT. ALDERAAN CASTLE, COMMAND CENTER - CONTINUOUS

               More celebration, but Obi Wan has his back to the crowd and

               his hand to his temple. Anakin's voice can be heard, faint

               and echoey.

                                   ANAKIN (V.O.)

                         Master Kenobi... the enemy

                         commander... in my sights. It's

                         him... know it.

                                   KENOBI (V.O.)

                         Anakin, do not engage. He's too

                         powerful.

                                   ANAKIN (V.O.)

                         Heading for the surface. I can take

                         him.

                                   KENOBI (V.O.)

                         Anakin, listen to me. He's a master

                         of the Dark Side. You're no match

                         for him. Anakin. 

                             (aloud)

                         Anakin!

               INT. INFINITY LANCE, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Anakin shakes his head. He looks grim, angry.

                                   ANAKIN

                         You said it yourself, when I'm

                         inside this ship, I have no match.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The Lance comes up on Rohn's tail. The particle beam makes

               contact with Rohn's cruiser, but it glances off as the ship

               takes quick evasive action.

               As Anakin course-corrects, the beam sweeps through and

               destroys one of Rohn's escorts.

               INT. ROHN'S CRUISER, HELM - CONTINUOUS

               Rohn pilots the ship himself.

                                   ROHN

                         Strong with the Force, this one,

                         but a mere babe.

               Rohn puts a single finger between his eyes, shuts them,

               clenches his jaw.

               INT. INFINITY LANCE, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Anakin's eyes roll back, and then he screams and grabs his

               head. Wracked with pain, he passes out, his head slumping

               against the glass of the cockpit.

               INT. ROHN'S CRUISER, HELM - CONTINUOUS

               Rohn opens his eyes and returns his hands to the controls.

                                   ROHN

                         A lullaby for you.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               Rohn's cruiser speeds toward Alderaan throwing off sparks

               where Anakin hit it.

               The Lance plummets behind it, off-kilter, unmanned, but also

               heading for the planet's surface.

               EXT. ALDERAAN, BATTLE FIELD - CONTINUOUS

               The clone ranks have thinned considerably -- the Jedi are

               mopping up now. 

               In the tall, blue grass, Faal and Canaris strike at each

               other wearily. A blow from Canaris sends Faal reeling. As he

               steadies himself, Faal makes a gripping gesture and Canaris

               begins to choke, his eyes wide with panic.

               As Canaris watches Faal laugh, something shifts in him, his

               eyes narrowing into slits. No longer straining for air, he

               relaxes into Faal's grip and begins to take slow, deep

               breaths, even as Faal struggles to maintain his hold.

                                   CANARIS

                         Is that all the Dark Side has to

                         offer?

                                   FAAL

                         Think Canaris, was I ever a match

                         for you before? You, the perfect

                         student. And yet today, you doubt

                         whether you'll survive. You're

                         right to doubt it. Your anger

                         weakens you, but it makes me

                         strong.

                                   CANARIS

                         Funny, I don't feel weak.

               The duel resumes.

               Above them, Rohn's cruiser descends toward the castle.

               Seconds behind, and falling much more rapidly, the Infinity

               Lance's trajectory suggests a crash in the middle of the

               city.

               EXT. ALDERAAN, CAPITAL CITY - CONTINUOUS

               The fighting is hot and heavy here. 

               Odo Luff uses the Force to topple a crumbling bit of statuary

               atop a small unit of clones. Looking up, he sees the Lance

               barreling down.

                                   ODO

                         Anakin.

               Luff drops to one knee and extends both arms out in front of

               him in a pushing gesture -- slowing the Lance's descent,

               righting its orientation. 

               The ship hits the ground hard but doesn't break apart. The

               Lance loses a bit of wing as it skids to a stop in the middle

               of a tiled square, a few hundred feet from Luff's position.

               Luff takes off at run, but is knocked to the ground by an

               exploding facade -- a university building perhaps. Shaking it

               off, Luff sees that the source of the blast is a large

               armored vehicle, like a tank atop six spherical wheels. 

               Luff looks at the tank, looks toward Anakin's position, back

               at the tank. In the distance, he spies the Sensei -- occupied

               by some clones, but relatively unencumbered.

               Dodging another blast from the tank -- this one aimed at him 

               - Luff closes his eyes for just a moment.

               The Sensei, fighting alongside a few of her pupils,

               dispatches the last of the clones in her immediate vicinity,

               then pauses as she hears Luff's projected thoughts.

                                   ODO (V.O.) (CONT'D)

                         The fighter that went down... It's

                         Kenobi's apprentice.

               The Sensei nods and makes for the Lance, its location easily

               marked by a column of smoke. Approaching the wreckage, she

               flings the canopy off with the Force, and reaches into the

               cockpit to pull out an unconscious Anakin.

               She pulls off his helmet and places her hand on his forehead.

               Anakin's eyes flutter open. She smiles at him, and he back at

               her -- but then he sees something behind her.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Look out!

               The Sensei shields Anakin with her body, and then there is a

               blinding flash of light and a cloud of thick smoke.

               As the smoke begins to clear Anakin sits up, rolls the Sensei

               off of him.

               He shakes her, and keeps shaking, desperately, but she does

               not rouse.

                                   ANAKIN (CONT'D)

                         On no. No, no.

               And then, the cloud of smoke dispels completely, and Anakin

               is kneeling on the ground next to the wreck of his ship and

               the corpse of a brave Jedi -- the massive barrel of a tank's

               main gun pointed straight at him.

               He braces for the worst, but suddenly, the tank is completely

               upended, rolling over onto its roof and sliding into the side

               of a building which collapses on top of it.

               Odo comes running around the corner.

                                   ODO

                         Anakin, are you alright?

                                   ANAKIN

                         She's dead.

                                   ODO

                         Bastards.

                                   ANAKIN

                         It's my fault.

                                   ODO

                         Stop it, boy.

                                   ANAKIN

                             (blubbering)

                         I didn't listen to him. I should

                         have listened, and I got her

                         killed.

               Odo nods as if he somehow understands the whole story, and

               maybe he does.

                                   ODO

                         Then you get up, and you make sure

                         she didn't die for nothing. With me

                         now.

               Odo helps Anakin to his feet, then turns his back and runs

               off into the fray. Anakin wipes tears and snot from his

               bruised and bloodied face.

               Something catches his eye -- a flash of yellow. Turning to

               look, he sees the handmaiden running for cover, a group of

               four clones in pursuit.

               He looks down at the dead Jedi at his feet, sees her

               lightsaber on the ground. For those of us in the know, we

               recognize it as Luke's father's lightsaber.

               Odo turns to say something to Anakin, and discovers he's not

               there.

               EXT. ALDERAAN CASTLE - CONTINUOUS

               Rohn leads his elite troopers along the battlements, his

               cruiser and a litter of corpses behind him on a landing pad.

               He easily dispatches a few royal guardsman in his path.

               INT. ALDERAAN CASTLE, COMMAND CENTER - CONTINUOUS

               Organa watches the battle in the city anxiously.

                                   ORGANA

                         Damn it, Leore, your men are

                         useless.

                                   LEORE

                         How dare you? My soldiers are dying

                         out there for your pack of artists

                         and philosophers.

                                   ELSPET

                         Watch your tone, General, you

                         address a king!

               Kenobi stands with his back to the altercation, still, eyes

               closed, searching. His eyes suddenly snap open.

                                   KENOBI

                         Quiet, all of you, and arm

                         yourselves.

                                   LEORE

                         Are you joking? You mean for us to

                         lead a sortie?

                                   KENOBI

                         The enemy commander is here, and he

                         is a master of the Dark Side.

                                   ORGANA

                         But, the palace is too well

                         guarded.

                                   KENOBI

                         Not well enough.

               Kenobi makes for the exit.

                                   MOTHMA

                         Where are you going, Obi Wan?

                                   KENOBI

                         To meet him.