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Star Wars Episode 1: A False Dawn
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 EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               Shield relays are repositioning, spreading out. The shield is

               failing as a result.

               INT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               A tech types furiously at a console.

                                   CHANDRILLAN TECH

                         Relays in position. This had better

                         work.

               Heph is on his knees next to the generator, tools all around

               him. His droids are cannibalizing components from all over

               the facility, dropping them at his side, as he pulls out

               parts from the generator and replaces them at breakneck

               speed.

                                   HEPH

                             (to one of his droids)

                         I said a conduction amplifier not

                         an induction amplifier! 

               The droid beeps.

                                   HEPH (CONT'D)

                         No you stay and weld this bit into

                         place.

                             (to another droid)

                         You, if your audio receptors are

                         working, get me a conduction

                         amplifier!

                             (into a comm)

                         Forbee, progress report!

               EXT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               Forbee shuffles along the hull of the platform toward a

               control box. It's slow going, as each step requires the

               activation and release of magnets.

               Ships and laser fire whiz all about. Forbee's head literally

               spins as he draws closer to his destination and beeps his

               reply.

               INT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               A droid wipes Heph's brow with a towel on the end of a

               manipulator arm.

                                   HEPH

                         Well, it's no picnic in here

                         either.

               Heph waves away a droid trying to hold a thermos of water to

               his lips.

                                   HEPH (CONT'D)

                         Hurry it up!

               EXT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               Forbee approaches the control box tentatively -- a tiny droid

               practically floating out in space, surrounded by total

               mayhem. 

               He studies the cover on the control box; several knobs need

               to be turned to unlock and open it. Forbee raises his various

               appendages in front of his optics -- none of them look like

               they'll work particularly well on smooth knobs. Forbee makes 

               a sad whine.

               INT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               Heph slaves away at the generator. The Chandrillan tech types

               furiously at his console.

                                   CHANDRILLAN TECH

                         If your calculations are correct,

                         the power will be more than

                         adequate.

                                   HEPH

                         What'd I tell ya?

                                   CHANDRILLAN TECH

                         In fact, there will be an initial

                         energy surge, just for a moment,

                         that will destroy any ship caught

                         in the force field. 

                                   HEPH

                         Hot damn!

                             (into comms)

                         Cap'n, I'll have this shield up in

                         half a minute, and when I do, any

                         ship hanging about between those

                         relays is a goner. You got me?

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Kitch pilots his way through the massive star battle.

                                   KITCH

                         Us out. Them in. Gotcha.

                             (into comms)

                         All units, lure as many ships into

                         the force field as possible --

                         right on it, now you hear? My

                         Heph's cooking up a surprise for

                         them, so when he says break, you

                         break! 

                                   ANAKIN (O.S.)

                         And then we go to work on those

                         destroyers, right?

                                   MANX

                         Sure thing, you little lunatic.

                                   KITCH

                         In fact, that's the perfect way to

                         hook 'em.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The Star and the Lance make for Rohn's destoryer.

               INT. ROHN'S SHIP, BRIDGE - MOMENTS LATER

               A jolt causes clone officers to lose their footing, though

               Rohn keeps his balance.

                                   ROHN

                         What was that?

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The explosion of a recent cannon blast is visible against the

               hull of Rohn's destroyer as the Falling Star fires another

               broadside.

               INT. ROHN'S SHIP, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               A clone officer looks up from his console.

                                   CLONE OFFICER

                         A lone frigate, sir. Our shields

                         are holding.

                                   ROHN

                         A lone frigate, you say?

               Rohn closes his eyes, opens them again.

                                   ROHN (CONT'D)

                             (to himself)

                         You will not escape this time.

                             (to his crew)

                         Destroy it.

                                   CLONE OFFICER

                         Affirmative.

               INT. FALLING STAR, MAIN BATTERY - CONTINUOUS

               Alda smirks.

                                   ALDA

                         There's more where that came from

                         you sack of sunyips!

               INT. INFINITY LANCE, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Anakin can see a several squadrons of fighters converging on

               their position, some of them fresh from the belly of Rohn's

               behemoth.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Looks like we got their attention!

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The Star and Lance make for the shield, multiple squadrons in

               pursuit.

               INT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               Heph slams one more component into place and begins welding.

                                   HEPH

                         That should do her.

                             (into comms)

                         You ready yet, Forbee?

               EXT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               Forbee's most hand-like appendage -- a three-pronged hook --

               scrapes uselessly around one of the control box knobs. He

               just can't get a grip.

               Forbee beeps his frustration.

               INT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               Heph jumps to his feet.

                                   HEPH

                         What do you mean you haven't got it

                         open yet?! What've you been doing

                         out there?!

               EXT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               Forbee has switched to a blow torch. This appears to be

               working, but it's very slow going. He beeps and whirs, as if

               to say, "I'm doing the best I can."

               INT. ALDERAAN CASTLE, COMMAND CENTER - CONTINUOUS

               Kenobi watches the continued bombardment devastate the

               battlefield.

                                   KENOBI

                             (into comms)

                         You must get the shield up, Tosca.

                         They can't take any more out there.

               INT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               Heph paces back and forth.

                                   HEPH

                             (into comms)

                         I'm trying. Believe me I'm trying.

                                   KITCH (O.S.)

                         You ready yet?

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The Falling Star, Infinity Lance and a host of other Republic

               ships are orbiting the planet, dodging relays, dragging enemy

               fighters behind.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Relays fly by at high speed.

                                   KITCH

                         See, first you set the trap, but

                         after that, you've got to spring

                         it, or it's no good.

                                   MANX

                         First rule of traps.

                                   KITCH

                         First rule of traps.

               INT. INFINITY LANCE, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Anakin is smirking as he pilots his way through the gauntlet

               with ease.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Don't let them get to you. I could

                         do this all day.

               EXT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               A swarm of ships buzzes the platform, enemy laser fire

               scoring the hull all around Forbee. He quits it with the

               blowtorch and shuffles for his life.

                                   HEPH (O.S.)

                         Forbee! How long, Forbee?

               A blast hits right in front of the little droid, who pulls a

               one eighty only to be stopped short by another blast.

                                   HEPH (O.S.) (CONT'D)

                         Do you almost have it? Talk to me!

               A ship screams by so closely that it almost takes paint off

               Forbee's head. He beeps and quivers with fear.

               And then another enemy fighter strafes the platform, a line

               of laser fire approaching Forbee, passing narrowly by and...

               blowing open the control box cover.

               Forbee does a double take, then shuffles toward the control

               box as fast as he can.

               INT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               Heph's on his knees, screaming into a communicator.

                                   HEPH

                         Forbee! Are you all right out

                         there? Forbee!

               Forbee beeps and whistles into the comms.

                                   HEPH (CONT'D)

                         I thought I'd lost you, buddy. Now,

                         what the blazes is wrong with you?

                         Hurry it up.

               EXT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               The interior of the control box looks like a highly complex

               fuse box. Forbee is flicking switches with blinding speed.

               Upon hitting the last switch, a few sparks fly from the box.

               Forbee beeps his completion.

               INT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               The lights go out, then hum back to life. Various indicator

               lights on the generator go green.

               Heph strides toward the tech and his console.

                                   HEPH

                         Atta boy!

                             (into comms)

                         All right Cap'n, we got it. On my

                         signal...

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - COCKPIT

               Kitch looks at Manx.

                                   KITCH

                         Music to my ears.

               INT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               Heph's finger hovers above the keyboard.

                                   HEPH

                         Break!

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The defenders of Alderaan break hard in all directions.

               INT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               Heph hits it.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The shield re-ignites, a wave of energy encircling the

               planet, and setting off a cascade of explosions -- enemy

               fighters bursting like popcorn.

               The nose is sheered off of one of the destroyers, and then it

               breaks apart in a series of detonations.

               And then the surge is over, and the shield is restored.

               INT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               Heph is hugging the Chandrillan Tech. An air lock opens and

               Forbee rolls in. Heph turns and runs over to Forbee, scooping

               him up in his arms and spinning him around.

               INT. ALDERAAN CASTLE, COMMAND CENTER - CONTINUOUS

               Mothma hugs Kenobi's arm as Bail Organa shakes the other

               hand.

                                   ORGANA

                         Those bucaneers of yours may just

                         have turned the tide of this

                         battle.

                                   KENOBI

                         They may have, but it's not over

                         yet.

                                   LEORE

                         Indeed. We've neutralized their

                         orbital artillery, but our defenses

                         have been weakened, and those

                         clones keep coming.

                                   KENOBI

                         We need to destroy the cloner.

                                   ORGANA

                         So, we send in the rest of our

                         frigates.

                                   KENOBI

                         No. I have some direct experience

                         with this. We don't have the

                         firepower, but they do.

                             (into comms)

                         Captain Kitch, we have a new

                         primary objective -- the enemy

                         cloner.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Manx and Kitch are looking at each other.

                                   KITCH

                         All right. What do you have in

                         mind?

                                   KENOBI (O.S.)

                         Well, I'm afraid it's all getting a

                         bit repetitious...

               INT. ALDERAAN CASTLE, COMMAND CENTER - CONTINUOUS

               Kenobi is eyeballing the hologram of Faal's ship.

                                   KENOBI

                         But, I believe it's time for

                         another act of piracy.