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Star Wars Episode 1: A False Dawn
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14-Oct-2015, 1:26 PM

 EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The Infinity Lance, the Falling Star, and a small squadron of

               Republic fighters sweep into the breach. Between Kitch's

               squadron and the automated turrets on the nearby relays, the

               dark fighters are dispatched relatively quickly.

               INT. INFINITY LANCE, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Anakin grins and nods his head.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Not too bad, huh Captain Kitch?

               Suddenly a huge bolt of energy streaks by.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The destroyers of the dark armada have approached the breach,

               and are firing upon the planet. Their second volley destroys

               two Republic fighters on its way to the surface.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Manx grits her teeth.

                                   MANX

                         We've got to plug this hole.

                                   KITCH

                             (into comms)

                         Heph? How's it going in there?

               INT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               Heph is in the midst of a heated discussion with a tech.

                                   CHANDRILLAN TECH

                         We've diverted as much power as we

                         can, the breach is as small as we

                         can make it.

                                   HEPH

                         Spread out the relays, get more

                         coverage.

                                   KITCH (O.S.)

                         Heph? Report.

                                   HEPH

                             (into comms)

                         There's a hole in the shield.

                                   KITCH (O.S.)

                         We know. Can you seal it?

                                   HEPH

                         Gee, I dunno Cap'n. Sure would be

                         nice. WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK

                         WE"RE TRYING TO DO OVER HERE??!!

                             (to tech)

                         Sorry about that.

                                   CHANDRILLAN TECH

                         If we spread out the remaining

                         relays, gaps will develop all

                         around the planet.

                                   HEPH

                         Sounds like we need more power.

                                   CHANDRILLAN TECH

                         Impossible.

                                   HEPH

                         We'll see about that. Boys!

               Heph's droids wheel over toward a row of consoles, extend

               datalink appendages into ports and begin scanning the

               platform's systems.

               Heph strides towards an important looking apparatus, studies

               it closely, then hits it hard with a wrench, knocking a piece

               to the floor in a hail of sparks. The lights flicker, and

               everyone in the control room looks his way.

                                   HEPH (CONT'D)

                         What?

               EXT. ALDERAAN, BATTLE FIELD - CONTINUOUS

               Canaris cuts his way through the clones. Suddenly, the long

               leg of a stilt walker crashes into the earth right in front

               of him.

               Canaris cuts it in two, and as the walker dips forward, off

               balance, Canaris leaps atop it, quickly slaying the entire

               crew and diving off before it falls.

               Across the battlefield, Faal deflects blaster fire with his

               light saber, his palms, clone troopers.

               A tall insectoid Jedi appears before him and beats him back

               with a flurry of quick saber strikes and a blast of Force

               energy. 

               Faal rights himself, bends his head, and charges forward,

               tackling the Jedi and driving him into the dirt. As Faal

               rises to his feet, he casually beheads the prone Jedi.

               Back across the battlefield, Jardin spies Faal. He sneers,

               and starts to move in Faal's direction, but stops short as a

               massive artillery blast flies overhead and an explosion hits

               the Republic trenches. Another huge explosion follows

               closely, and a third, striking amidst the melee of the

               battlefield.

               More, explosions scorch the battlefield -- hitting the

               trenches, the Jedi, even the clones.

               The tough looking alien who dodged the friendly fire closes

               her eyes briefly mid-combat, senses an imminent strike, and

               dodges, narrowly avoiding an artillery blast. As she recovers

               her footing, she is incinerated in a second blast.

               The Jedi fight on, valiantly holding back the horde as best

               they can, felling the tall stilt walkers with their

               lightsabers and the Force, causing the grass to ensnare the

               legs of the clones, and then cutting them down, confusing

               their minds and making them fire upon each other. But they

               cannot stem the tide.

               Clone troops begin to overwhelm the trenches, thermal

               detonators blasting dirt into the air, blasts from the stilt

               walkers disintegrating Republic soldiers, clone boots

               trampling bodies.

               The clones push toward the city.

               INT. ALDERAAN CASTLE, COMMAND CENTER - CONTINUOUS

               Leore screams into the comms.

                                   LEORE

                         Fall back to the city! I repeat

                         fall back, fall back.

               Kenobi closes his eyes.

                                   KENOBI (V.O.)

                         Yoda. We need you.

               EXT. ALDERAAN, MOUNTAINTOP - CONTINUOUS

               On a mountaintop overlooking the field of battle, Yoda nods,

               wind blowing through his wispy hair. He is surrounded by the

               rest of the Jedi council.

               They look toward the sky, arms outstretched, and begin to

               exhale slowly.

               INT. ALDERAAN CASTLE, COMMAND CENTER - CONTINUOUS

               Kenobi's eyes are still closed.

                                   KENOBI (V.O.)

                         Odo, they're beginning to break

                         through.

               EXT. ALDERAAN, CAPITAL CITY - CONTINUOUS

               Odo Luff stands in the middle of a main street, with the

               sensei and her pupils. He looks at the window of a nearby

               home, where a citizen of Alderaan grips his blaster and nods

               grimly.

                                   ODO

                             (bellowing)

                         To your positions! These are your

                         homes now, your shops, schools,

                         your families. Fight hard and true,

                         and the Force will protect you.

               INT. ROHN'S SHIP, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               Rohn stands tall, his hands clasped behind his back,

               observing the orbital barrage.

                                   ROHN

                         And what will you do now, proud

                         Jedi? 

                                   CLONE OFFICER

                         Incoming transmission.

               A holographic image of a clone captain appears before Rohn.

                                   CLONE CAPTAIN

                         Commander, we're caught in some

                         sort of tractor beam, but we're not

                         picking it up on our sensors.

                                   ROHN

                         A tractor beam strong enough to

                         move a destroyer? Reverse thrust,

                         all engines. 

                                   CLONE CAPTAIN

                         Commander, it's no use, it's too

                         strong.

                                   CLONE OFFICER

                         Another transmission.

               A second hologram appears.

                                   CLONE CAPTAIN TWO

                         Commander, we can't find it on the

                         scanners, but...

               INT. CLONE DESTROYER, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               The clone captain looks in horror at the giant view panel in

               front of him, as Alderaan draws nearer and another destroyer

               drifts in front of his.

                                   CLONE CAPTAIN TWO

                         ...we're being pulled toward the

                         planet's surface by a tractor beam,

                         and we're not the only ship.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               Two destroyers are being pulled from formation, even as the

               rest continue to bombard the planet's surface. One of them

               drifts into friendly fire.

               INT. ROHN'S SHIP, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               One of the holograms starts to flicker.

                                   CLONE CAPTAIN

                         Commander, we're taking heavy

                         damage. Cease fire, I repeat, cease-

               The hologram disappears. Rohn slams his fist against his

               palm.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The destroyer breaks apart in a series of explosions. The

               second destroyer picks up speed as it is pulled closer and

               closer to Alderaan.

               EXT. ALDERAAN, BATTLE FIELD - CONTINUOUS

               The battle drags on, the ground littered with mounds of clone

               corpses, artillery continuing to take its toll on Republic

               soldiers and Jedi alike, as the soldiers make a ragged

               retreat and the Jedi hold the field. 

               Clone reinforcements are still taking the field and dying in

               droves. 

               Uther Halladan and the Jedi with the eye patch fight back to

               back, an impervious barrier that no clone passes through

               alive.

                                   EYEPATCH

                         We can't keep this up.

                                   HALLADAN

                         We have to.

                                   EYEPATCH

                         These orbital strikes...

                                   HALLADAN

                         Trust in the Force. Trust in Kenobi

                         and the Council.

               An nearby artillery blast sends them both flying. As the dust

               clears and they gain their feet, Jedi One looks up at the

               sky.

                                   EYEPATCH

                         You were right.

               The clone destroyer has entered the atmosphere, glowing with

               the heat of reentry.

               EXT. ALDERAAN, MOUNTAINTOP - CONTINUOUS

               The council focuses hard as they bring the ship down. The

               falling destroyer sweeps past the field of battle and into

               the side of the mountain, where it explodes without causing

               collateral damage.

               EXT. ALDERAAN, BATTLE FIELD - CONTINUOUS

               The sight of the smitten destroyer invigorates the Jedi, and

               their surge of morale is measurable in clone losses.

               EXT. ALDERAAN, CAPITAL CITY - CONTINUOUS

               The crash of the capital ship is clearly visible, even from

               here.

               The citizens of Alderaan fire upon the approaching clones

               from makeshift bunkers and barricades in streets and homes. 

               Odo, the Sensei, her pupils, and a handful of other Jedi cut

               down as many clones as they can, leaping onto and off of

               roofs and through shops and living rooms. Odo fights with

               surprising daintiness, dancer-like in his light movements --

               a hippo in a tutu, but ever so deadly.

               The blonde handmaiden fires from the window of her apartment,

               just off a main street. A brother and two parents fight

               alongside.

               INT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               Heph, holding a large steel component argues with a

               Chandrillan tech. Forbee backs him up.

                                   HEPH

                         I'm telling you if we reroute power

                         from the thrusters into the

                         generator, we can compensate for

                         the loss of those relays!

                                   CHANDRILLAN TECH

                         It'll overheat the system, short

                         the hole shield.

               Forbee beeps angrily.

                                   CHANDRILLAN TECH (CONT'D)

                         It most certainly will!

                                   HEPH

                         But not instantaneously, right? How

                         long will we have?

                                   CHANDRILLAN TECH

                         Before the whole shield goes down?

                             (dourly)

                         Two hours maximum.

               Forbee whistles.

                                   HEPH

                         Two hours! Two hours?! That might

                         as well be a bloody lifetime.

                             (into a communicator)

                         Kenobi, I can close the gap, but

                         we'll fry the system in under two

                         hours.

               INT. ALDERAAN CASTLE, COMMAND CENTER - CONTINUOUS

               Kenobi claps his hands together.

                                   MOTHMA

                         Mr. Tosca, waste no more time

                         talking to us. Get it done.

               INT. ROHN'S SHIP, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               The ship lurches.

                                   CLONE OFFICER TWO

                         Commander, the enemy tractor

                         beam...

                                   ROHN

                         That's no tractor beam.

               Rohn closes his eyes.

                                   ROHN (CONT'D)

                         Aim canon one half degree

                         starboard, tilt up point one three

                         degrees.

                                   CLONE OFFICER TWO

                         It's just a mountaintop, minimal

                         life form reading.

                                   ROHN

                         I wouldn't say that. Fire!

               EXT. ALDERAAN, MOUNTAINTOP - CONTINUOUS

               The council all stop what they're doing and look at each

               other. Kneeling in a circle they spread their arms out to

               their sides.

               Suddenly the massive blast from Rohn's canon strikes them...

               and doesn't. A huge explosion, but deflected somehow.

               As the smoke and fire clear, Yoda and the council become

               visible -- dirty, weakened, but all alive.

               Then the ground beneath them begins to shift, the mountain

               top is beginning to collapse. Cracks appear in the ground,

               large boulders break off and tumble past.

                                   DALU DALU

                         Go! I'll hold it.

               The Jedi nod their deep respects and retreat down the

               mountain side in great leaps and bounds. Yoda jumps from a

               shear ledge in a controlled fall, thousands of feet down. He

               lands at the feet of the mountain decelerating before

               touchdown.

               And then the top of the mountain crumbles and collapses.

               INT. ALDERAAN CASTLE, COMMAND CENTER - CONTINUOUS

               Obi Wan winces and a tear forms in his eye.

               INT. ROHN'S SHIP, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               The ship stops.

                                   ROHN

                         Let that taste fill their mouths.

               INT. ALDERAAN CASTLE, COMMAND CENTER - CONTINUOUS

               Mothma looks sympathetically at Kenobi.

                                   KENOBI

                             (to himself)

                         Heph, tell me you're close.