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Star Wars Episode 1: A False Dawn
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 INT. ALDERAAN CASTLE, COMMAND CENTER - CONTINUOUS

               A holographic image of the fleet is seen making it's approach

               toward Alderaan. The commander of the Republic forces, Tet

               Leore is the first to spot it.

                                   LEORE

                         Enemy fleet, inbound.

               Kenobi and Organa exchange a look.

                                   KENOBI

                         At least the wait's over.

                             (into coms)

                         Fighters ready. They're here.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The Republic ships hang in formation. The Star and Anakin's

               fighter are there too, floating side by side.

               INT. INFINITY LANCE, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Anakin, in a flight suit and helmet, takes a deep breath and

               looks out toward the darkness, trying to make visual contact.

                                   KITCH (O.S.)

                         You name her yet?

                                   ANAKIN

                             (a little sheepish)

                         I was thinking I'd call her the

                         Infinity Lance.

                                   KITCH (O.S.)

                         I don't know tadpole, kind of a

                         mouthful. What about --

               And just then, the dark fleet peeks into view. Specs at

               first, growing larger by the second.

                                   ANAKIN

                             (interrupting)

                         Captain Kitch?

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Kitch and Manx are looking at the same thing.

                                   KITCH

                         I see 'em. High alert, we have

                         visual.

               INT. ALDERAAN CASTLE, COMMAND CENTER - CONTINUOUS

               Mothma steps up to the battle map.

                                   MOTHMA

                         Raise shields.

               INT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               Heph and his droids sit on a step as Chandrillan techs go

               about their ignition sequence.

                                   CHANDRILLAN TECH

                         Raising shields, ma'am.

               Forbee beeps and shuffles.

                                   HEPH

                         Then play some Solusteen Solitaire,

                         if you're bored.

               Two more droids are beeping at each other. One slaps the

               other with a manipulator arm.

                                   HEPH (CONT'D)

                         Hey!

               INT. ROHN'S SHIP, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               Alderaan, now much larger in the panel, is rapidly encircled

               in a glowing shield.

                                   ROHN

                         What's this?

               A clone science officer looks up from his monitor.

                                   CLONE SCIENCE OFFICER

                         Planetary shield, sir. Chandrillan

                         in design. Our ships may pass

                         through, but the surface will be

                         protected from orbital bombardment.

               Rohn sneers.

                                   ROHN

                         Mon Mothma, friend to the Jedi.

                         Launch fighters! Destroyers, focus

                         fire on the capital ship, and then

                         target the shield relays.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               A cloud of fighters stream out of the dark destroyers, and a

               first volley of cannon fire is loosed.

               INT. REPUBLIC CAPITAL SHIP, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               In the view panel the dark fleet has grown larger, and the

               enemy fighters can be seen approaching like schools of fish. 

                                   REPUBLIC ADMIRAL

                         Fighters, hold your positions until

                         they --

               The ship is rocked by that first volley.

                                   REPUBLIC ADMIRAL (CONT'D)

                         Report!

                                   REPUBLIC OFFICER

                         Shields holding sir, but I don't

                         know how long we can last under

                         sustained fire from all of their

                         destroyers.

                                   REPUBLIC ADMIRAL

                         Weapons still online?

                                   REPUBLIC OFFICER

                         Yes sir.

                                   REPUBLIC ADMIRAL

                         Then fire!

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               Fire from the Republic capital ship scores the hull of a dark

               destroyer, but next to it, Rohn's dreadnought is unveiling

               its big gun.

               INT. REPUBLIC CAPITAL SHIP, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               Another barrage shakes the bridge. Alarms sound.

                                   REPUBLIC OFFICER

                         Shields at fifty percent, sir.

               The Admiral is watching the dark fleet approach, the fighter

               swarm almost in range.

                                   REPUBLIC ADMIRAL

                         Fighters hold. Enemies in range in

                         twenty, nineteen...

               INT. ROHN'S SHIP, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               The big gun has locked into place, visible from the bridge.

                                   ROHN

                         Fire.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The Republic capital ship explodes after being struck by a

               giant beam of red light.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               The explosion is clearly visible and the shock wave shakes

               the ship.

                                   KITCH

                         Screw this.

                             (into comms)

                         All fighters, this is Captain Renzo

                         Kitch. They're damn well close

                         enough, you hear? Scramble and

                         attack, attack, attack!

               INT. INFINITY LANCE, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Anakin pulls hard on the controls.

                                   ANAKIN

                         You don't have to tell me twice.

               INT. ALDERAAN CASTLE, COMMAND CENTER - CONTINUOUS

               Kenobi and the others stare at the battle map in dismay.

                                   LEORE

                         Gah! Our only destroyer.

                                   KENOBI

                         Our forces are engaging.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The frigates and fighters of the Republic, The Falling Star

               and the Infinity Lance scatter as they are met by a swarm of

               inbound enemies.

               The two fleets create a roiling mass -- fighters in dizzying

               dogfights, lasers flashing all about. The Republic frigates

               and the Star chart looser, slower spirals, their turrets and

               mounted guns popping enemies in all directions.

               INT. FALLING STAR, SWIVEL GUN TURRET ONE - CONTINUOUS

               Alda sneers as he guns down dark fighters. 

               The Infinity Lance streaks through his field of vision,

               brakes, spins, fires -- the particle beam, a hot red verging

               on pink, tears through three enemy fighters, the successive

               explosions creating an image not unlike a shish-kabob, with

               the Lance's laser as the skewer.

               And the beam just keeps on going...

                                   ALDA

                         Holy...

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Manx and Kitch watch in awe.

                                   MANX

                         Heph wasn't kidding about that gun.

                                   KITCH

                             (into comms)

                         I changed my mind, the name works,

                         just watch where you point that

                         thing!

               INT. INFINITY LANCE, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Anakin smiles proudly, then sets his jaw, and resumes the

               fight.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               Anakin is an absolute prodigy, the Lance climbing and

               rolling, stalling and accelerating, it's particle beam

               ripping through dark fighters in sweeping arcs.

               INT. ROHN'S SHIP, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               Rohn stands square and firm at the helm.

                                   ROHN

                         All destroyers, focus fire on the

                         shield relays. Faal, begin the

                         ground assault.

               INT. CLONER - CONTINUOUS

               Faal is observing the battle from a large viewing panel.

                                   FAAL

                         But Commander, you have not yet

                         begun bombardment.

                                   ROHN (O.S.)

                         No.

                                   FAAL

                         The shield is still up.

               INT. ROHN'S SHIP, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               Rohn smiles.

                                   ROHN

                         Yes it is.

                                   FAAL (O.S.)

                         I'm sure our destroyers will have

                         it down in short order, there's no

                         need...

                                   ROHN

                         You are ready now, are you not?

                         Then you will strike immediately,

                         while their fleet is occupied.

                         Artillery strikes will begin in

                         short order.

               INT. CLONER - CONTINUOUS

               Faal crushes the communicator in his fist and makes for his

               transport again.

                                   FAAL

                         We launch now.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - MOMENTS LATER

               Troop transports and armored vessels pour out of the cloner.

               INT. ALDERAAN CASTLE, COMMAND CENTER - CONTINUOUS

               Kenobi sees the transports.

                                   KENOBI

                         Enemy troop transports on approach.

                                   LEORE

                         Don't let them through.

               INT. REPUBLIC FRIGATE - CONTINUOUS

               A Republic frigate captain clenches his teeth at the helm. 

                                   REPUBLIC FRIGATE CAPTAIN

                         These fighters have us outnumbered

                         four to one, it's all we can do

                         just to stay ali--

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The frigate explodes under heavy fire, as the enemy troop

               transports begin to penetrate the scrum on their way to the

               surface.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Kitch and Manx watch the transports fly by.

                                   MANX

                         Seems these Republic boys can't do

                         two things at once.

                                   KITCH

                         We'll only be able to thin the herd

                         a bit Kenobi, but they won't pass

                         this way without paying a toll. All

                         gunners, prioritize transports!

               INT. FALLING STAR, SWIVEL GUN TURRET ONE - CONTINUOUS

               Alda blasts a fighter.

                                   ALDA

                         One for me...

               Then he targets a transport.

                                   ALDA (CONT'D)

                         And one for you.

               INT. FALLING STAR, SWIVEL GUN TURRET THREE - CONTINUOUS

               Gunner Three roars and laughs as he lets lasers fly in all

               directions.

               INT. INFINITY LANCE, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Anakin's pulling hard on the stick, effecting a quick one

               eighty.

                                   ANAKIN

                             (to himself)

                         Gotta get as many as we can.

               He checks his rear -- fighters are in pursuit -- and lines a

               transport up in his sights.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The particle beam erupts from the Infinity Lance and takes

               out two transports. 

               INT. CLONE TRANSPORT - CONTINUOUS

               Armed and armored clones are incinerated.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               The fighters on Anakin's six open fire, but he takes evasive

               action, destroying the transports ahead whenever he has the

               opportunity.

               INT. FAAL'S TRANSPORT - CONTINUOUS

               Faal stands by a viewport, watches the closest transport

               burst as Anakin's particle beam zips past. Quailing at the

               sight, he runs to the helm and tears the pilot out of his

               seat, taking the position himself.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               Faal's transport veers away from Anakin's wrath and descends

               through the atmosphere. Many more ships follow -- Anakin and

               Kitch can only do so much.

               INT. ALDERAAN CASTLE, COMMAND CENTER - CONTINUOUS

               Organa flares his nostrils.

                                   ORGANA

                         They're getting through.

                                   ELSPET

                         It was inevitable.

                                   LEORE

                         Soldiers, dig in, and weapons at

                         the ready. Your battle's about to

                         start.

               EXT. ALDERAAN, BATTLE FIELD, TRENCHES - CONTINUOUS

               A long row of Republic troopers bring blasters and mounted

               guns to bear. A Republic Lieutenant holds a communicator.

                                   REPUBLIC LIEUTENANT

                         Yes sir.

               EXT. ALDERAAN, BATTLE FIELD - CONTINUOUS

               Clone transports touch down hard, and clone troopers stream

               out of them. Faal emerges from a transport with shock troops

               close behind.

               Faal ignites his lightsaber, red, and gestures his troops

               forward. The clones double-time toward the trench. 

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               Dark destroyers fire upon shield relays, but the blasts

               aren't penetrating.

               INT. PRIMARY SHIELD PLATFORM - CONTINUOUS

               Heph is looking over a tech's shoulder.

                                   HEPH

                         Holding up nice, but what happens

                         when the relays start to go down?

                                   CHANDRILLAN TECH

                         If they start to go down, then

                         holes will open up in the shield.

                         But they don't have the firepower

                         to do any damage from out there.

                         The relays are only vulnerable from

                         the other side of the shield.

               Heph nods and walks back over to his droids.

                                   HEPH

                         Nope, still nothing to do. But, it

                         won't be long now, I wager.

               INT. ROHN'S SHIP, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               A clone officer approaches Rohn.

                                   CLONE OFFICER

                         Commander, our weapons are failing

                         to damage the shield relays.

                                   ROHN

                         I can see that.

                                   CLONE OFFICER

                         What are your orders?

               Rohn flinches, puts his fingers to his forehead.

                                   ROHN

                         Something's wrong.

                                   CLONE OFFICER

                         The shield is simply too strong.

                                   ROHN

                         No, not that. Send fighters to

                         attack the relays from within the

                         force field.

                                   CLONE OFFICER

                         As you command.

               The officer departs.

                                   ROHN

                         No, something else is terribly

                         wrong. The force, it's far too

                         strong.

               EXT. ALDERAAN, BATTLE FIELD - CONTINUOUS

               Faal strides amidst his advancing shock troopers, the

               Republic trenches almost within firing range.

               EXT. ALDERAAN, BATTLE FIELD, TRENCHES - CONTINUOUS

               Faal's troops are almost within their range as well. From

               this perspective, the superiority of the enemy's numbers is

               clear. A great horde approaches.

                                   REPUBLIC LIEUTENANT

                         Ready... aim....

               INT. ALDERAAN CASTLE, COMMAND CENTER - CONTINUOUS

               Kenobi is observing the impending confrontation.

                                   KENOBI

                         And men, do aim carefully, eh?

                         We're good, but we're not perfect.

               EXT. ALDERAAN, BATTLE FIELD - CONTINUOUS

               Out of an unseen trench, a hundred yards in front of the

               Republic soldiers, leap a row of Jedi, a hundred of them.

               Canaris is standing squarely at their center.

               Not quite simultaneously, a hundred lightsabers, in a rainbow

               of colors, ignite.

               His troops still advancing, Faal stops in his tracks.

               INT. ROHN'S SHIP, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               Rohn's closed eyes snap open.

                                   ROHN

                         It can't be!

               EXT. ALDERAAN, MOUNTAINTOP - CONTINUOUS

               High above the battlefield, the Jedi Council is deep in

               meditation.

               EXT. ALDERAAN, BATTLE FIELD - CONTINUOUS

               Canaris draws in a deep breath.

                                   CANARIS

                         Can you feel the power of the

                         Council? We are strong with the

                         Force today. Charge!

               The Jedi dash forward to meet the mass of clones. The clone

               troopers fire their blasters as they approach, but the Jedi

               easily deflect anything that comes close.

               Behind the Jedi, the Republic soldiers open fire, felling the

               foremost clones before the Jedi meet them. One young soldier

               fires a blast just past the head of an intimidating alien

               Jedi -- she tilts her head slightly to dodge it. Turning her

               head briefly, without breaking stride, she glares at the

               soldier, who gulps and sheepishly looks around at his fellow

               soldiers.

               The opposing forces close on each other, and the Jedi wade

               through the clones just as easily as they do through the knee

               high grass of Alderaan. Clone bodies are flung this way and

               that, weapons shatter in their hands, lightsabers cut through

               clone flesh.

               One Jedi with four arms pulls enemy blasters from clone hands

               into his own, discharging them in multiple directions, even

               as he deflects and strikes with his lightsaber. Another Jedi,

               a hovering blob-like organism with no limbs, wields its

               lightsaber with the invisible arms of the force.

               The clones that the Jedi leave in their wake are picked off

               by the Republic soldiers before they near the trenches. It's

               a massacre, but transports full of reinforcements are still

               landing, and the armored vehicles of the clones start to take

               the field -- shielded gun platforms perched high atop long,

               stilt-like legs.

               Donzin Faal, still rooted to the ground, looks behind him as

               more of his forces land, then ahead at the slaughter. Turning

               his fear to anger, he rushes into the fray.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF ALDERAAN - CONTINUOUS

               An explosion, as one of the shield relays goes down and a

               small hole appears in the shield.

               Dark fighters are swarming nearby relays. The relays are

               protected by automated turrets, and several of the fighters

               succumb, but so do several more relays -- and the breach

               widens.

               INT. ALDERAAN CASTLE, COMMAND CENTER - CONTINUOUS

               Bail Organa turns from the battle map and rushes to a large

               window. From a distance, the dominance of the Jedi is more

               apparent.

                                   ORGANA

                         Kenobi, they're magnificent!

                                   KENOBI

                         Yes they are.

                             (beat)

                         I should be with them.

                                   MOTHMA

                         We have a problem. They're punching

                         a hole in the planetary shield.

               The damage is visible on the battle map.

                                   KENOBI

                         Their fighters are targeting the

                         relays.

                                   MOTHMA

                         It was only a matter of time.

                             (into the comms)

                         Shield team, report.

                                   CHANDRILLAN TECH (O.S.)

                         We've lost several relays, but

                         we're working on increasing force

                         field output. I don't think we can

                         close the breach, but we can

                         minimize it, if we don't lose too

                         many more relays.

                                   MOTHMA

                         Get to work. 

                             (to war council)

                         We've got to protect the relays.

                                   LEORE

                             (into comms)

                         Fleet status?

                                   REPUBLIC CAPTAIN (O.S.)

                         Outnumbered, sir -- fighters

                         everywhere. But we're holding our

                         own.

                                   KENOBI

                         We need you to send a squadron to

                         protect the shield relays.

                                   REPUBLIC CAPTAIN (O.S.)

                         I'll try, sir, but our hands are

                         full. Calling all available units,

                         repeat all available units...

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               The breach in the shield is centered in the Star's view

               panel.

                                   KITCH

                         All available units on me!

               The Lance whizzes by.

               INT. INFINITY LANCE, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Anakin smiles.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Way ahead of you.