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Star Wars Episode 1: A False Dawn
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INT. DARK HULK, BRIDGE - MOMENTS LATER

               The body of a pale trooper hits the floor near the boots of

               Captain Kitch, a light sprinkling of ash falling on top of

               it. 

               The room is strewn with bodies -- Kitch and his team have

               taken the bridge. Kitch and Alda holster their weapons,

               Jardin powers down his lightsaber.

                                   KITCH

                         You know, I really thought this was

                         gonna be a lot harder.

                                   JARDIN

                         You lost a man.

                                   KITCH

                         I figured we were all done for, so

                         I'd say we're pretty lucky. 

                                   JARDIN

                         Pirate through and through.

                                   KITCH

                         Speaking of which, it's time to get

                         this ship out of here.

               Kitch moves to the controls. Alda and his eep follow. As they

               fiddle around, Kitch raises his communicator.

                                   KITCH (CONT'D)

                         Kenobi, haven't heard from you in a

                         while. The ship is ours, I

                         repeat...

               The door to the bridge hisses open, and Kenobi and Anakin

               step through. Anakin is visibly shaken.

                                   KENOBI

                         Well done, gentlemen.

                                   KITCH

                         Hey, they're alive.

                                   JARDIN

                             (noting Anakin's face)

                         What did you find?

                                   KENOBI

                         Are we ready to make the jump to

                         lightspeed?

                                   KITCH

                         Working on it right now, I just

                         need to replot. They already have a

                         course programmed into the ship's

                         computer, so... uh oh.

                                   KENOBI

                         What is it?

                                   KITCH

                         This ship was headed for Alderaan.

                                   JARDIN

                         Alderaan?!

                                   KENOBI

                         So, that's where it begins.

                                   ALDA

                         These guys are bold, I'll give 'em

                         that.

                                   KITCH

                         Ok. Got it. Course set. Just need

                         to bring her around for a clean

                         getaway.

               Kitch raises his communicator again.

                                   KITCH (CONT'D)

                         Manx, we're ready to blow this

                         snarp stand!

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Manx is sweating. The star field in front of her rolls

               wildly.

                                   KITCH (O.S.)

                         Manx? It's all aboard.

                                   MANX

                         Aye aye, Cap. Except, I'm kind of

                         in the middle of something.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               The Falling Star climbs, falls, spins and twists amidst a

               swarm of fighters and a line of transports, doing everything

               she can to stay alive while Heph and the gunners shoot down

               what they can.

               Meanwhile, the dark capital ship has initiated maneuvers.

               It's bringing its guns to bear on the hulk.

               INT. DARK HULK, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

                                   KITCH

                         I don't wanna hear it. You get your 

                         butt docked immediately. You

                         understand me, First Mate?

                                   MANX

                         Aye, Cap, doing our best, believe

                         me, but Heph's no gunner, and...

                                   ANAKIN

                             (looking out the viewing

                              panel)

                         Oh boy.

                                   KITCH

                         What?

               Anakin points a finger at the dark destroyer as it moves to

               engage.

                                   ANAKIN

                         It looks like they're cutting their

                         losses.

               Kitch's back stiffens.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Manx looks desperate.

                                   MANX

                         You've got to make the jump, Cap.

                         I'll follow as soon as I can shake

                         these guys.

               INT. DARK HULK, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               Alda's locked eyes with Kitch.

                                   ALDA

                         You heard her. Let's make our exit.

                                   KITCH

                         We're not leaving the Star.

                                   ALDA

                         She'll be right behind. This ain't

                         no battle ship, remember? We've got

                         no guns, and we can't outrun that

                         destroyer. 

                                   KITCH

                         We go to lightspeed with Manx in

                         the hangar. That's the plan, and

                         we're sticking to it.

                                   JARDIN

                         I respect your loyalty, Captain

                         Kitch, but we can't just sit here

                         and wait.

                                   KITCH

                         Who said anything about waiting?

                         Alda, hard to port!

               Alda glares at Kitch, but ultimately chooses to follow

               orders.

                                   JARDIN

                         What are you doing, Kitch?

                                   KITCH

                         Spark up that laser sword, or shut

                         your beak, bird boy. I'm buying her

                         some time.

                                   JARDIN

                             (looking at Kenobi)

                         Bird boy??!

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               The hulk is on a collision course with the capital ship. The

               dark destroyer lets loose a barrage of laser fire.

               INT. DARK HULK, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               Kitch stands at the controls with Alda, the capital ship

               coming straight toward them, slow but sure, rocking the hulk

               with laser blasts. 

                                   MANX (O.S.)

                         Cap, what are you doing?!

                                   KITCH

                         Losing my damn mind.

                                   MANX (V.O.)

                         They're coming right for you!

                                   KITCH

                         We're coming right for them. I'm

                         betting they'll blink first.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Manx looks angry.

                                   MANX

                             (to herself)

                         Blasted maniac. Thinks he's saving

                         me -- now I've gotta save them.

                             (on comms)

                         All guns, I need you to clear me a

                         patch of space to bow.

               INT. FALLING STAR, SWIVEL GUN TURRET ONE - CONTINUOUS

               Gunner Three pivots and fires, pivots and fires.

                                   GUNNER THREE

                         Amazing as I am, there's only so

                         much I can do.

                                   MANX (O.S.)

                         I'll only need a second.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               The Falling Star quits it with the evasive action and bee

               lines for the dark capital ship -- as a result, she starts

               taking heavier fire.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               The cockpit jolts from incoming fire. The capital ship, some

               distance away on its crash course with the hulk, is centered

               in the viewing panel. Much closer, enemy fighters

               continuously zip past the viewing panel, occasionally

               succumbing to the Star's swivel guns.

               Manx is hurriedly flipping switches and turning dials.

                                   HEPH (O.S.)

                         What are we doing Manx? We're

                         getting pummeled.

                                   MANX

                         Just brace yourself.

               Manx flips one last switch.

                                   MANX (CONT'D)

                             (to herself)

                         Got it.

               She takes a breath, steadies her hands, watches for a break

               in the fighter traffic.

                                   MANX (CONT'D)

                         Come on.

               INT. FALLING STAR, SWIVEL GUN TURRET ONE - CONTINUOUS

               Gunner Three's face is alight with the glow of laser fire.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               The Star is surrounded, but it doesn't deviate from its

               course.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Manx grits her teeth.

                                   MANX

                         Come on.

               A fighter explodes directly in front of the panel, and just

               for a moment, the path is clear.

               Manx punches it.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               The Star makes the jump to lightspeed, disappearing from

               amidst the fighter swarm, and reappearing a moment later just

               clear, and that much closer to the enemy capital ship.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Manx is a bit shell-shocked -- that took expert timing -- but

               she shakes it off.

                                   MANX

                         Coming for you, Renzo.

               INT. DARK HULK, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               Kitch and Alda are still at the helm.

                                   KITCH

                         How are we holding up?

                                   ALDA

                         We're taking a lot of damage, but

                         so far so good. This baby's

                         massive. Hull like a tortola hide.

               Kenobi slowly approaches the viewing panel, the oncoming

               capital ship looming ever larger.

                                   KENOBI

                         There it is again. Do you feel it,

                         Canaris?

               Jardin approaches, closes his eyes.

                                   JARDIN

                             (hatefully)

                         Yes ,I do.

               A buzz from the helm console.

                                   ALDA

                         Captain, we're being hailed.

                                   KITCH

                         Well, patch them through.

               An image feed fills the left third of the towering viewing

               panel -- it's Donzin Faal.

                                   DONZIN FAAL

                         Greetings to the soon-departed. Who

                         are the fools I have the

                         displeasure of addressing?

                                   KITCH

                         The dire pirate, Captain Renzo

                         Kitch, Terror of the Larnican--

               Kenobi and Canaris appear at the helm, recognition narrowing

               Canaris's eyes.

                                   KENOBI

                         Jedi Knights, Obi Wan Kenobi and

                         Jardin Canaris. And who are you,

                         apostate?

               Kitch is a little annoyed at the interruption.

                                   DONZIN FAAL

                         Oh ho. Jedi? I am Donzin Faal, and

                         I want my ship back.

                                   KENOBI

                         Then you should have taken better

                         care of it.

                                   DONZIN FAAL

                         You live up to your reputation. Mad

                         Kenobi, ever the fool, consort of

                         petty criminals and hedge knights,

                         like my old friend Jardin.

               Jardin can only glare, anger making him rigid.

                                   KITCH

                         Who are you calling petty?

                                   KENOBI

                         Criminals and hedge knights who

                         just stole your most important ship

                         right out from under your nose.

                                   DONZIN FAAL

                         Indeed. And that is why I must

                         offer you surrender, before I'm

                         forced to destroy you.

                                   KITCH

                         Good luck with that. Don't think

                         you have the fire power.

                                   DONZIN FAAL

                         Alas, we will soon see.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               There is movement near the bow of the capital ship, a

               shifting of plates and flaps, the emergence of a large

               apparatus from the interior.

               INT. DARK HULK, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               Through the viewing panel, this apparatus is plainly

               recognizable as a huge cannon -- pointed right at them.

                                   ALDA

                         Uh, Captain?

                                   KITCH

                         Brace for impact.

               A visible flow of energy surrounds the cannon, as it charges

               up for a volley. Kenobi and Jardin exchange a look. Alda's

               eep clutches his leg.

                                   ALDA

                         Captain!?

                                   KITCH

                         You heard me.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               The cannon's blast seems a split second away, when BOOM, it

               explodes under heavy fire from The Falling Star, which has

               just swooped in and unleashed a vicious broadside.

               INT. FALLING STAR, MAIN BATTERY - CONTINUOUS

               Heph pumps his fist as Forbee does a little celebratory spin.

                                   HEPH

                         Got 'er, Ma'am! I got her!

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Manx slaps the console in front of her.

                                   MANX

                         Atta boy, Heph!

                             (in the comms)

                         Direct hit, Cap.

               INT. DARK HULK, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               The explosion is greeted with cheers. Donzin Faal in the

               image feed, stumbles with the impact.

                                   KITCH

                         Manx, you're an angel.

                                   JARDIN

                         Now, turn aside Faal, or it is you

                         who will be destroyed!

                                   DONZIN FAAL

                         Never.

                                   KITCH

                         Then open wide, because this giant

                         hunk of metal's going straight down

                         your throat.

                                   KENOBI

                         We'll see you on Alderaan.

                                   DONZIN FAAL

                         What?! How did you...?

                                   KENOBI

                         Short one army.

               Kitch cuts the transmission.

                                   KITCH

                         Ok, now where's Manx?

               A crackle on the comms.

                                   MANX (O.S.)

                         Almost there, Cap.

               Through the viewing panel, the capital ship, almost upon them

               now, begins to change course.

                                   ANAKIN

                         He's flinching.

                                   KITCH

                         Of course he is.

               But, even as it effects its ponderous turn, a swarm of

               fighters emerge from the ship's hull.

                                   KITCH (CONT'D)

                             (in the comms)

                         Manx, we've got more fighters. I

                         want you docked now.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

                                   MANX

                         Aye aye, Captain.

               Manx jerks the controls.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF HORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               The Falling Star weaves through oncoming fighters, its swivel

               guns popping off continuously. As it speeds toward the hulk's

               hangar we get a close up view of the two giant vessels and

               how close they were to collision.

               INT. DARK HULK, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               Canaris steps forward.

                                   JARDIN

                         Kitch, begin the countdown.

                                   KENOBI

                         Are you sure we shouldn't wait

                         until she's aboard?

                                   KITCH

                         She'll be here. Ten!

               EXT. SPACE, OFF HORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               The Falling Star races toward the hulk -- almost there.

               INT. DARK HULK, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               Kitch looks nervous.

                                   ALDA

                         Five seconds.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               A thick formation of fighters stands in between the Star and

               its destination.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Manx raises her eyebrows.

                                   MANX

                         Oh boy.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               The Falling Star barrel rolls past enemy fighters.

               INT. DARK HULK, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

                                   ALDA

                         Two, one...

               Anakin looks at Kitch with concern. Kenobi's expression is

               steely. 

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               The Star dives under one last ship, does a full loop to right

               it's course, and shoots into the hangar bay.

               INT. DARK HULK, HANGAR BAY - CONTINUOUS

               The Star touches down roughly, screeching and skidding

               hundreds of yards across the hangar floor.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Manx is jostled about as she slides to a stop.

                                   MANX

                             (in the comms)

                         Clear!

               INT. DARK HULK, BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS

               Kitch closes his eyes in relief, then he smirks.

                                   KITCH

                         Hey Canaris, I just remembered we

                         left your ship behind.

                                   JARDIN

                         I'll come back for it later!!

               Kitch starts cackling.

                                   JARDIN (CONT'D)

                             (to Kenobi)

                         He's crazier than y--

               Kitch punches it.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               The dark hulk elongates and disappears in a flash, leaving

               the fleet in its dust.