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carlhollywood
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Star Wars Episode 1: A False Dawn
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14-Oct-2015, 1:17 PM

 INT. CAPTURED TRANSPORT, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Kitch pilots the transport toward a landing zone demarcated

               with flashing lights.

                                   KITCH

                         I've boarded a lot of ships Kenobi,

                         but never one this big, and never

                         with a crew this small.

                                   KENOBI

                         Never with two Jedi.

                                   JARDIN

                         There's a lot of ground to cover,

                         to be sure, but it's our theory

                         that the ship is lightly manned,

                         relatively speaking.

                                   KENOBI

                         It's not a war ship, we know that.

                                   KITCH

                         It's true, I didn't make any guns

                         on her. And who would be crazy

                         enough to board when she's

                         surrounded by a fleet?

               Kitch sets the transport down. The hatch to the cargo bay

               opens.

                                   KENOBI

                         Who indeed?

               Kitch smirks as he pops out of his seat. Kenobi, Kitch, and

               Jardin cross into the cargo bay.

               INT. CAPTURED TRANSPORT, CARGO BAY - CONTINUOUS

               Alda, Anakin, and the gunners are on their feet -- Alda's eep

               squats by his side, Alda's hand on his head.

                                   KENOBI

                         Alright boys, we were just telling

                         your captain that the ship is

                         poorly defended for her size, but

                         she's a giant, so be ready for a

                         fight.

                                   JARDIN

                         And possibly more than one as we

                         make our way to the bridge.

                                   ALDA

                         I ain't worried. We've seen what

                         you two can do.

                                   KITCH

                         And now we show 'em what we can do.

                                   ALDA

                         Damn right.

               The gunners sling their blaster rifles over their shoulders.

                                   GUNNER ONE

                         Aye aye, Captain.

                                   GUNNER TWO

                         Aye aye.

                                   JARDIN

                         Let's begin then.

                                   KENOBI

                         Ready Anakin?

               Anakin nods resolutely.

                                   KENOBI (CONT'D)

                         May the force be with us.

               Kitch punches the button to open the cargo bay door, and it

               opens slowly, revealing a bustling hangar bay before them. 

               Dozens, maybe hundreds, of the pale troopers are escorting

               floating cells-- mostly eeps, but some other creatures large

               and small as well, including a couple of the monstrosities

               that caused a stir at landing field -- toward a corridor at

               the rear of the bay.

               INT. DARK HULK, HANGAR BAY - CONTINUOUS

               Kenobi and his team step out onto the hangar floor

               cautiously, weapons in hand. Kitch looks toward the corridor

               where the captives are being taken, then turns in the other

               direction and spots a hatch nearer to them.

               Kitch taps Kenobi on the shoulder and points to the hatch.

                                   KITCH

                             (whispering)

                         That way to the bridge.

               Kenobi and Jardin nod.

                                   KITCH (CONT'D)

                         If we're lucky, we get there

                         without much fuss and vent the ship

                         before we make the jump to

                         lightspeed.

                                   JARDIN

                         Agreed.

               Kenobi nods.

               The team makes for the hatch to the bridge, their heads

               swiveling in all directions as they try to evade detection. 

               Ducking behind ships and architecture, with most of the

               traffic going the other way, they're able to make it almost

               to the hatch, though they'll have to expose themselves to get

               there.

               Kenobi holds up his fingers. One, two, three. The team makes

               their move.

               Across, the hangar bay, a trooper is struck in the back by a

               floating cage. As he turns to yell at whoever bumped into

               him, he spots the team in the distance.

                                   PALE TROOPER

                         Intruders!

               Nearby troopers reach for their comms.

               Kenobi and company sprint for the hatch, but just as they

               arrive, a security door slams tight over it, and alarms

               sound. Lights flash.

               The team turns their backs to the hatch in resignation.

                                   KENOBI

                         It was a good plan.

                                   KITCH

                         I thought so.

               A laser blast scores the security door between Kenobi's and

               Kitch's heads. They exchange a look.

                                   JARDIN

                         Attack!

               The team breaks off and a major fight ensues. The crew of the

               Falling Star darts from cover to cover firing on the pale

               troopers with their blasters. They're crack shots, especially

               Kitch with his big hand cannon and Alda with his twin

               blasters.

               Alda is agile, leaping and dodging this way and that, nailing

               targets mid-air.

               Kitch relies more on cover and a steady hand. His big blaster

               disintegrates his targets, or sometimes just portions of

               them, leaving only ash. And, he proves good with his fists,

               dealing with a few disarmed troopers in close quarters.

               Anakin, too, acquits himself admirably -- he makes a short

               range blaster do long range work.

               The two Jedi do most of the damage, of course. Flinging ships

               and cargo this way and that, knocking back groups of

               troopers, cutting them down with lightsabers.

               Kenobi and Kitch bail each other out as a trooper almost gets

               the drop on each of them.

               The eeps and some of the larger creatures even join in the

               fight. The eeps are surprisingly vicious, and frighteningly

               strong. 

               Alda's buddy gets him out of a scrape near the captured

               transport -- pinning a trooper, biting at him with previously

               hidden predator's teeth, sending a severed arm flying, and

               popping up with his cute face covered in blood. 

               Gunner One takes a blast to the chest, signalling the arrival

               of enemy reinforcements. One whole squad of them are

               incinerated by a thermal detonator thrown by the surviving

               gunner in a fit of vengeance.

               The rest are no match for the two Jedi. Jardin's style

               recalls that of a musketeer, one handed, elegant,

               swashbuckling. Kenobi fights more like a samurai, two-handed

               primarily, economical movements, death and stillness.

               The two Jedi display a remarkable combat coordination despite

               their differing technique. It's as if they can anticipate

               each others movements in addition to those of their

               opponents.

               And eventually, the troopers are defeated. Kitch, Alda and

               Gunner Two kneel over the corpse of their crewmember, while

               Kenobi and Anakin study the corpses of the pale troopers, and

               Jardin works at a console on the wall. 

               A few sparks fly, the alarms stop ringing, and the security

               door opens.

               Kenobi ends his inspection and puts a hand on Kitch's

               shoulder.

                                   KENOBI

                             (gently)

                         Jardin has the door open.

                                   KITCH

                         Right. Don't worry boys, he'll get

                         a funeral. We're taking this ship,

                         aren't we?

                                   ALDA

                         Aye, Captain.

               They make toward Canaris and the door, but Obi Wan stays

               where he is.

                                   JARDIN

                         Are you coming, Kenobi?

                                   KENOBI

                         These men we're fighting. These...

                                   JARDIN

                         Things.

                                   KENOBI

                         Yes. You sense it too?

                                   JARDIN

                         They're somehow less than... whole.

                                   KENOBI

                         Yes. Incomplete. Empty. Unnatural.

                         You continue on to the bridge, I'm

                         going that way.

               Kenobi points in the direction the pale troopers were taking

               their captives.

                                   KENOBI (CONT'D)

                         I want to know what's happening

                         here.

                                   KITCH

                         We're venting the ship when we hit

                         the bridge, remember?

                                   KENOBI

                         Not anymore. I believe that was the

                         bulk of the resistance.

               Alda's eep trots up to him.

                                   KENOBI (CONT'D)

                         And we don't want to hurt our new

                         friends. We'll just have to capture

                         or kill any opposition on our own.

                                   KITCH

                         I know which I prefer. 

                             (tossing Kenobi a

                              communicator)

                         Here.

               Kenobi catches it.

                                   KITCH (CONT'D)

                         Keep in touch.

               Kenobi, in turn tosses the communicator to Anakin.

                                   KENOBI

                         Come on.

               Kitch and crew step through the door. Jardin nods at Kenobi,

               who nods back, before departing. The door closes behind him.

               Kenobi and Anakin head the other way.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - MOMENTS LATER

               Blips on a scanner. Manx checks it out, then squints out the

               viewing panel.

               Troop transports are traveling from the dark capital ship to

               the hulk.

                                   MANX

                         Here we go.

               She engages the throttle.

               INT. DARK HULK, PASSAGEWAY - CONTINUOUS

               Kitch, Jardin and the others make their way toward the

               bridge. A transmission comes through.

                                   MANX (V.O.)

                         Captain, you got transports coming

                         your way from the capital ship. I'm

                         going to try and keep them off you,

                         but be ready in case any get

                         through.

                                   KITCH

                         We're en route to the bridge. Hold

                         'em as long as you can.

               A unit of pale troopers rounds the corner on Kitch's party

               and opens fire.

                                   KITCH (CONT'D)

                             (returning fire)

                         Talk to you later.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Laser fire is heard on the comms, and then the transmission

               cuts out. The enemy fleet is growing rapidly in the viewing

               panel.

               Manx punches a comm button.

                                   MANX

                         Swivel guns.

                                   GUNNER THREE (O.S.)

                         Linked.

                                   MANX

                         Fire when ready.

               INT. FALLING STAR, SWIVEL GUN TURRET ONE - CONTINUOUS

                                   GUNNER THREE

                         Always ready.

               Gunner Three opens fire, and a twin stream of laser fire

               connects his gun to an enemy troop transport. Two more

               streams converge on the transport from the other guns, and

               the enemy ship explodes in a ball of flame.

               Gunner Three pivots the gun toward a new target.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH

               The three swivel guns of the Falling Star turn in unison and

               another transport explodes. An aim adjustment, and then

               another explosion.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               The explosions are visible through the viewing panel.

                                   MANX

                         Keep it up.

               More blips on the scanner.

                                   MANX (CONT'D)

                         Wonderful.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               A fighter squadron bears down on the Falling Star.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Manx punches the comm again.

                                   MANX

                         Swivel guns, we've got company.

               INT. FALLING STAR, SWIVEL GUN TURRET ONE

                                   GUNNER THREE (V.O.)

                         Roger that.

               Pivoting toward the capital ship, the fighters pop into view.

               Gunner Three acquires his new targets and fires.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               The view through the panel rolls and twists as Manx evades

               the fighter squadron, laser blasts terminating all around.

                                   MANX

                         Heph.

               INT. FALLING STAR, MAIN BATTERY - CONTINUOUS

               Heph sits at the controls for the main gun, Forbee at his

               side.

                                   HEPH

                         Aye, Ma'am.

                                   MANX (V.O.)

                         I'm taking evasive action, but I'm

                         gonna try and keep those transports

                         in front our cannons as much as I

                         can.

                                   HEPH

                         I'll take 'em when you give 'em too

                         me.

               Forbee beeps and whistles.

                                   HEPH (CONT'D)

                         You are not the better shot. You

                         can't even use the controls!

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               A squadron of dark fighters hounds the Falling Star as Manx

               tries to ride the line between evasion and targeting. The

               swivel guns pop a few pursuers, but there are plenty more. 

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Manx's face is intense, focused.

                                   MANX

                         Heph, I know I'm not giving you

                         much to work with, but you have to

                         take out those transports.

                                   HEPH (V.O.)

                         You're not giving me much to work

                         with, Ma'am.

                                   MANX

                         I just said that, damn it. I'm

                         doing the best I can. Flying

                         without a copilot here.

               INT. FALLING STAR, MAIN BATTERY - CONTINUOUS

                                   HEPH

                         Alright, alright.

               Heph squints into the periscope. The view sways and twists

               wildly. He tries to center the crosshairs on something,

               anything.

               Forbee beeps at him.

                                   HEPH (CONT'D)

                         Quiet, you.

                             (pause)

                         Alright now...

               Heph fires.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               An impressive barrage shoots forth from the Star's big guns,

               but the result is lackluster. Two transports explode, but the

               rest of the blasts are wide.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               The explosions are heard, but not seen, through the ship's

               view panel.

                                   HEPH (V.O.)

                         Tarnation and tesseracts!

               Forbee's whistles of admonition can be heard over the comms.

                                   HEPH (V.O.) (CONT'D)

                         I said shut u-

               Manx shuts off the comms.

               INT. DARK HULK, PRODUCTION FACILITY - CONTINUOUS

               Obi Wan and Anakin lurk cautiously through sterile

               passageways. Mobile force field pens filled with eeps and

               other Yorvath wildlife surround them.

               Large, forklift-like droids collect the hovering pens and

               carry them further along. Obi Wan and Anakin follow. Strange

               noises intermingle with the cries of the animals -- hissing,

               bubbling, pumping.

               The pens are being carried in the direction of gigantic vats

               with tangles of tubes emerging from them. The vats, clear on

               the sides, look to be filled with a glowing pink liquid.

               Obi Wan and Anakin watch as one of the pens has its contents

               emptied into a vat. We don't see the result, we only hear it,

               and see the horror on their faces, as the animals are

               dissolved in the glowing solution. 

                                   KENOBI

                         Horrible.

               Obi Wan moves to cover Anakin's eyes, but Anakin slaps his

               hand away. Tears well up in his eyes, but his anger keeps him

               from looking away.

               Kenobi uses the force to pull several large pieces of

               machinery and empty pens to block the path of the slaughter.

               The cargo droids begin piling on top of each other as they

               attempt to deposit their loads.

               Pens spill over, and animals break free.

               Alarms sound, like at a factory when the assembly line goes

               down, and maintenance droids emerge to fix the issue. Kenobi

               cuts a few down with his lightsaber -- it's not a fight, just

               the quickest way to disable them.

               Anakin follows suit, shooting maintenance droids with his

               blaster. You can tell he'd rather be shooting something else.

               Obi Wan and Anakin follow the largest tangle of tubes down

               another corridor, occasionally disabling approaching

               maintenance droids without breaking stride.

               The corridor ends in a vast chamber, filled with rows and

               stacks of roughly human-sized pods that extend to the

               ceiling. The tubes he's been following also terminate here,

               feeding into the pod stacks. 

               Medical and science droids oversee whatever is happening in

               this facility.

                                   ANAKIN

                         What is this place?

               Obi Wan approaches one of the pods. A skeletal medical droid

               notes his presence, and turns to a nearby comrade.

                                   MEDICAL DROID ONE

                         There is an unauthorized humanoid

                         in the hatching chamber.

                                   MEDICAL DROID TWO

                         We are not programmed for security.

                         Please continue with your

                         assignment.

                                   MEDICAL DROID

                         Affirmative, but the long term

                         viability of our assignment is in

                         jeopardy. If...

                                   MEDICAL DROID TWO

                         Your communications are

                         distracting. Please cease.

                                   MEDICAL DROID ONE

                         Affirmative, but...

                                   MEDICAL DROID TWO

                         Cease!

               Obi Wan, with Anakin just over his shoulder, puts a hand on

               the surface of one of the vertical pods.

               At first, it appears that it is made of some sort of frosted

               glass, a shadowy figure visible underneath. 

               But, as Obi Wan runs his hand across it, it's clear that it's

               not a quality of the glass, but condensation. Obi Wan wipes

               some away and reveals a torso with a tube of glowing pink

               fluid attached at the naval.

               He reaches up and quickly wipes away more condensation. And

               there it is.

               A face. Exactly like that of the identical pale troopers. 

                                   KENOBI

                         Oh no.