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Star Wars Episode 1: A False Dawn
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14-Oct-2015, 1:15 PM

EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH - LATER

               The Falling Star burns toward Yorvath -- the dark fleet

               barely visible around the curve of the planet.

               EXT. YORVATH, UPPER ATMOSPHERE - MOMENTS LATER

               A thick layer of clouds obscures the planets surface as the

               Falling Star continues its descent.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Kitch and Manx are flying via their instruments as the heavy

               clouds deposit water onto the viewing panel, the ship rocking

               and bucking with turbulence. Kenobi and Anakin steady

               themselves on the backs of the pilots' seats.

                                   MANX

                         Almost through it.

               And then the turbulence stops and the clouds dissipate,

               revealing dense, verdant jungle.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Whoa.

                                   KENOBI

                         Nothing like Tatooine, is it?

                                   ANAKIN

                         It's so... wet.

               EXT. YORVATH, SKIES - CONTINUOUS

               The Falling star cruises above the two-tiered canopy of a

               rainforest -- incredibly tall, slender, Seussian trees above

               and squat, alien oaks, with kelpy leaves and mammoth trunks

               below.

               Brightly colored, paper-flat, ray-like creatures, with

               flowing wings and tails, undulate through the air like

               sentient kites.

               In the distance, a cloud of transport traffic darkens a

               portion of the sky. 

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

                                   MANX

                         Approaching his position.

                                   KITCH

                         Should be fun trying to land in

                         this tangle.

               A clearing in the trees appears in front of them.

                                   KENOBI

                             (smug)

                         That should suffice for a landing

                         zone.

               EXT. YORVATH - MOMENTS LATER

               The Falling Star touches down in the clearing, and the

               camouflaged Jedi emerges from the treeline.

               The Falling Star's ramp descends, and Kenobi leads Kitch,

               Manx and a fascinated Anakin off the ship and toward the

               stranger. As they approach, the Jedi removes his hood,

               revealing a feathery crest atop his head and a long beak.

                                   KENOBI

                         Jardin, my brother.

                                   JARDIN

                         Obi Wan Kenobi, as I live and

                         breathe.

               The Jedi embrace. Pulling away, Kenobi gestures toward Kitch.

                                   KENOBI

                         Captain Renzo Kitch of the Falling

                         Star, Jardin Canaris, Jedi Knight.

                                   JARDIN

                             (extending his hand)

                         Captain Kitch, your reputation

                         precedes you.

               Kitch and the Jedi shake hands.

                                   MANX

                         Really?

                                   JARDIN

                         Absolutely, Miss...?

                                   MANX

                         Orulian. Manx Orulian, first mate.

                                   JARDIN

                         The exploits of the dire pirate,

                         Captain Kitch and his crew are well

                         known to those who take an interest

                         in such things.

                                   KITCH

                         I hope you won't hold it against

                         me.

                                   JARDIN

                         I'm tempted, believe me, but Obi

                         Wan insists that you are his true

                         and trusted friend.

                                   KITCH

                         He does?

               Kenobi makes a small shrug -- aren't you?

                                   JARDIN

                         And that earns you my respect and

                         gratitude. 

               Kenobi nods approvingly.

                                   JARDIN (CONT'D)

                         And deepest sympathies.

                                   KENOBI

                         Hey.

                                   KITCH

                         He DOES make things difficult.

                                   JARDIN

                         Difficult? That's the most polite

                         word I could possibly imagine to

                         describe the man!

                                   KITCH

                         I thought it was a Jedi thing.

                                   JARDIN

                         Heavens no.

                             (then, looking at Anakin)

                         Who is the boy?

                                   KENOBI

                         Anakin Skywalker, a gifted young

                         pilot from Tatooine. He has begun

                         the training. 

                                   JARDIN

                         An apprentice?! Now?!

                                   KENOBI

                         I know, but I feel it's the right

                         thing.

                                   JARDIN

                         Your every impulse the will of the

                         Force. But, it's no use arguing

                         with you. 

                             (to Anakin)

                         Pleased to meet you, young

                         Skywalker.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Sir.

                                   JARDIN

                         Jardin will do. 

                             (beat)

                         Perhaps you've chosen well, Obi

                         Wan.

                                   KENOBI

                         Do you doubt me, Canaris?

                                   JARDIN

                         Constantly. 

                                   KENOBI

                             (laughs)

                         Is it near?

                                   JARDIN

                             (pointing)

                         Yes, about one kilometer that way -

                         one of many satellite landing

                         fields, much smaller than the main

                         site. Ready your away team, and

                         we'll move out.

                                   KENOBI

                         Alright. Kitch, you'll come with

                         me, and we'll take Alda and two of

                         the gunners.

                                   KITCH

                         Agreed. Manx, Heph, and Anakin will

                         stay with the ship.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Not a chance. First new planet I've

                         ever seen, and you want me to watch

                         from orbit?! Forget it.

                                   KENOBI

                         This one's too dangerous, lad.

                                   ANAKIN

                         I can use a blaster.

                                   JARDIN

                         Listen to your master. Obi Wan

                         rarely counsels caution -- when he

                         does, he should be heeded.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Master? Who said anything about a

                         master?

                                   JARDIN

                             (to Kenobi)

                         I thought you said you were

                         training him.

                                   KENOBI

                         We've only just begun.

               Canaris raises a feathered eyebrow.

                                   KENOBI (CONT'D)

                         It's been rather informal.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Great. I'll get ready. 

               Anakin marches toward the Falling Star.

                                   JARDIN

                             (to Kenobi)

                         Hotheaded. He reminds me of you

                         before your beard grew in.

                                   KENOBI

                         I knew there was a reason I liked

                         him.

                                   JARDIN

                         Listen, Kenobi, another thing...

               The two of them walk a few steps away from Manx and Kitch.

                                   JARDIN (CONT'D)

                             (hushed)

                         Parts of your report may have been

                         treated with suspicion, but you

                         were right. The commander of this

                         fleet is a disciple of the Dark

                         Side.

               INT. FALLING STAR, MAIN BATTERY - LATER

               Gunners One and Two pull blasters out of a weapon locker.

               Alda affixes a second gun belt, one blaster pistol on each

               hip. He grabs a third and tosses it to Anakin, who nods

               proudly.

               EXT. YORVATH - LATER

               Jardin Canaris leads Kenobi, Kitch, Alda, Anakin and the

               gunners through the jungle. Kitch wears a giant blaster

               pistol in a shoulder holster.

               Kenobi mops moisture from his forehead.

                                   KENOBI

                         It is wet.

               Anakin smiles. He's watching a butterfly-like insect crawl on

               the back of his hand.

               Ahead of the away team and off to one side of their path, in

               a small clearing, a large object is mostly concealed by a

               camouflage tarp.

               Gunner One points it out to Gunner Two.

                                   KITCH

                         What's that up ahead?

                                   JARDIN

                         It's my ship.

                                   KITCH

                         You're OWN ship?

                                   JARDIN

                         I didn't walk here.

                                   KITCH

                         You hear that, Kenobi? When he

                         needs to go somewhere, he just

                         takes his own ship.

                                   KENOBI

                         Where's the fun in that?

                                   JARDIN

                         It isn't too much farther now. Try

                         to keep it down.

               The sound of a ship's thrusters is heard nearby and then a

               transport of the dark fleet appears above the canopy, headed

               for space.

               Jardin darts ahead toward where the ship took off and

               positions himself behind a tree toward the edge of another

               clearing, this one unnatural. Trees have been felled and

               cleared, the forest floor scorched. Jardin waves the rest of

               the party on, gesturing for them to find cover.

               In the clearing rests one last dark transport. Two armed

               guards secure the ship.

               Alda begins to move toward a flanking position, but Jardin

               stills him with a gesture.

               A loud rustling from some trees nearby causes the guards to

               look that way. Out of the forest, come five more of the

               identical pale soldiers, struggling to herd three captive

               animals in electrified collars.

               The animals look like a hybrid of rabbits and chimps --

               largish, sentient but sub-human, and damn cute. 

                                   ANAKIN

                         What the hell?

               Kenobi and Jardin glare at him in unison.

               The soldiers herd their captives onto the transport.

                                   GUARD ONE

                         That's a full load. Make ready for

                         departure.

               The transport's thrusters warm up. 

               Kenobi and Jardin nod at each other, and Jardin begins

               circling the clearing, like Alda had done, but much more

               quietly. Kenobi turns to the rest of the away team.

                                   KENOBI

                         Leave this to us.

               Anakin receives an extra pointed look.

               When Jardin reaches his position, Kenobi makes a strange

               tossing gesture in the opposite direction.

               An extremely loud honking, like that of a gigantic goose,

               cuts through the forest, echoing over the noise of the

               transports thrusters.

               The four pale soldiers who are still outside the transport

               pause to look in that direction. A fifth peeks his head out

               the cargo door.

               And then a bright orange flash streaks across the clearing

               from Jardin's position, and the five soldiers are instantly

               replaced with five corpses (one of them shy a head), all

               felled in one deadly-fast stroke. 

               And just as suddenly, Jardin is visible, standing just past

               them, orange lightsaber in hand.

               A sixth crewman appears in the door, sees the carnage and

               yells toward the cockpit. Jardin swings his arm, and the pale

               soldier is pulled from the ship directly through the orange

               lightsaber, falling in a heap a few feet past Canaris.

               The transport begins to lift off, but Kenobi is in the

               clearing now, eyes on the cockpit, fingers to temple. The

               transport's ascent falters, then it descends haltingly, and

               the thrusters cut out.

               The ship's canopy opens slowly -- Kenobi standing directly in

               front of it, unmoving -- revealing two pilots, each drawing a

               blaster pistol. Alda and Kitch take aim.

               But, before they can fire, the pilots simultaneously fire on

               each other and slump over, dead.

               Kenobi shakes his head and shoulders, and makes a brrr sound

               with his lips.

                                   KENOBI (CONT'D)

                         Nasty, that.

               Alda and Kitch exchange a look -- wow -- and stow their

               weapons.

                                   ANAKIN

                         You heard I'm training to be a

                         Jedi, right?

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - MINUTES LATER

               Manx sits in Captain Kitch's seat. The comms crackle to life.

                                   KITCH (V.O.)

                         Alright, Manx -- here goes nothing.

                                   MANX

                         Roger that, Captain.

               EXT. YORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               The Falling Star lifts off.

               EXT. YORVATH, SECONDARY LANDING SITE - CONTINUOUS

               The captured transport rises off the jungle floor.

               INT. CAPTURED TRANSPORT, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Kitch is at the helm, Canaris seated next to him, Obi Wan

               hunched between them.

                                   KITCH

                         Those guys we killed. Know where

                         they came from? Don't think I've

                         ever seen their kind before.

                                   KENOBI

                         No, I don't.

               Jardin shakes his head.

                                   KITCH

                         I don't like it. This plan better

                         work, Kenobi.

                                   KENOBI

                         Tell him not to worry, Jardin.

                                   JARDIN

                         Don't worry, Captain Kitch, I'm

                         fairly certain that I, at least,

                         will make it through in one piece.

                                   KENOBI

                         You see, if he were concerned, he

                         wouldn't joke.

               Kenobi opens the hatch to the cargo bay and steps through.

               INT. CAPTURED TRANSPORT, CARGO BAY - CONTINUOUS

                                   JARDIN (O.S.)

                         Who says I'm jo-

               The hatch hisses shut behind Kenobi. The cargo bay is filled

               with force field cages housing the rabbit/chimps, dozens of

               them. The most recently captured creatures -- let's call them

               eeps -- are loose, investigating their surroundings,

               communicating with their caged friends, etc.

               One of the eeps is sitting on Alda's lap. It's much too large

               to be comfortable, but it doesn't seem to mind. Alda, on the

               other hand looks less than comfortable. Anakin's petting it.

                                   KENOBI

                         Alda, you've made a friend.

                                   ALDA

                         He's made me, more like. Get him

                         off me, would ya?

               Anakin scratches the eep under its chin. It purrs and coos.

                                   ANAKIN

                         He's awful cute.

                                   ALDA

                         Cut it out, would ya?

               Kenobi paces in front of the cages, a pensive look on his

               face.

                                   KENOBI

                         What could they possibly want with

                         you, my friends?

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH - MINUTES LATER

               The captured transport falls into formation with other

               transports heading toward the dark hulk.

               INT. CAPTURED TRANSPORT, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               A transmission on the comms.

                                   FLIGHT CONTROL (V.O.)

                         Ship one four seven seven. You are

                         cleared for landing. Acknowledge.

                                   KITCH

                             (in crisp English)

                         Roger.

               Jardin gives him a look.

                                   KITCH (CONT'D)

                         I know a few words. Don't tell

                         Kenobi.

                                   KENOBI (O.S.)

                         Don't tell me what?

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               The dark hulk looms in the foreground as the captured

               transport approaches.

               INT. CAPTURED TRANSPORT, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               The hatch opens, and Kenobi steps in behind Jardin and Kitch,

               who both look a bit awed, a hard edged shadow rising through

               the cockpit and over their faces.

                                   KENOBI

                         There's no use pretending you

                         didn't say...

                             (stopped short by the view

                              through the port)

                         Goodness, that is a big ship.

               Over their shoulders and through the viewport, the dark hulk

               grows ever larger. A hangar door yawns open, ready to swallow

               the captured transport and the other ships in its formation. 

               Kitch hits the comms.

                                   KITCH

                         Manx, we're going in. Are you in

                         position?

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Through the viewport the hulk and the rest of the ships are

               visible at what seems like a safe distance.

                                   MANX

                         Aye, Cap, we see you. You be

                         careful in there, Renzo, you hear

                         me?

                                   KITCH (V.O.)

                         It's too late for careful, I think,

                         but I'll try my damndest not to

                         die.

               INT. DARK HULK - CONTINUOUS

               The captured transport cruises into a giant hangar bay.