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Star Wars Episode 1: A False Dawn
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14-Oct-2015, 1:12 PM

 INT. FALLING STAR, MESSDECK - CONTINUOUS

               The crew sit at the table or lean on counters. Obi Wan paces

               before them.

                                   KENOBI

                         We're headed for the Yorvath system

                         to rendezvous with an old comrade

                         of mine -- another Jedi. 

                                   ALIEN GUNNER ONE

                             (to Gunner Two)

                         Long trip. We've got some time

                         then.

                                   ALIEN GUNNER THREE

                         Before the end, you mean?

                                   KENOBI

                         He's been investigating the dark

                         fleet, just like I have.

                                   ALDA

                             (puffing on his pipe)

                         Who'd he almost get killed?

               Kitch gestures for him to stow it for now.

                                   KENOBI

                         As far as I know, he's been working

                         alone.

               Alda opens his mouth to make another crack, but Manx glares

               him into submission.

                                   KENOBI (CONT'D)

                         He says the enemy has dispatched

                         only a small force to Yorvath. One

                         capital ship, a light fighter

                         escort, and our prize, one of those

                         hulks.

                                   MANX

                             (disgust in her voice)

                         One of the slave ships?

                                   KITCH

                         I don't think so Manx, Yorvath is

                         uninhabited.

                                   KENOBI

                         On the contrary, it's teeming with

                         life.

                                   KITCH

                         Beasts and pests, sure -- nothing

                         of use to a slaver.

                                   KENOBI

                         I agree. But one of the hulks is

                         there nonetheless, and according to

                         my friend, the planet is being

                         ravaged.

                                   HEPH

                         So, what's the big ship for?

                                   KENOBI

                         That's the question, isn't it?

                                   KITCH

                         You want to get on board.

                                   KENOBI

                         Yes. And furthermore, I want to

                         steal it. If only... Kitch old

                         friend, do you know any pirates?

               Heph chuckles. Alda rolls his eyes.

                                   KITCH

                         All right, you heard him. Rest up

                         now, because things get serious

                         when we hit Yorvath. Dismissed.

               The crew shove off for some R and R. Kitch, Manx and Kenobi

               head for the cockpit.

               INT. FALLING STAR, PASSAGEWAY - CONTINUOUS

               The trio approach the helm.

                                   KITCH

                         You may consider a capital ship and

                         fighter escort to be light

                         protection...

                                   KENOBI

                         We handled more than that the last

                         time we faced them. And this time,

                         I thought we might try a stealthier

                         approach.

                                   KITCH

                         Now you're talking some sense. But

                         what do we do with the prize once

                         we've got it?

               The hatch to the cockpit hisses open.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Kitch and Manx slide into their seats. Manx starts flipping

               switches and punching in data.

                                   KENOBI

                         One step at a time, old friend. I'm

                         sure the path will present itself.

                                   KITCH

                         Because you had mentioned something

                         about going to the Senate. Capital

                         ships I can handle, but I'm a

                         wanted man on Coruscant, Kenobi.

                                   KENOBI

                         Yes, yes. Let's not get ahead of

                         ourselves.

                                   MANX

                         Course set for just off Yorvath.

               Kitch's hand pauses over the jump controls.

                                   KITCH

                         I've got a bad feeling about this.

               Despite his reservations Kitch makes the move.

                                   KENOBI

                         Wait a moment, would you?

                                   KITCH

                         You're getting cold feet now?

               A monitor flashes.

                                   MANX

                         Ship incoming.

               Kitch looks at Kenobi.

                                   KENOBI

                         We've got room for one more.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF TATOOINE - MOMENTS LATER

               Anakin's ship floats into the Star's hangar bay, and the Star

               shoots off into hyperspace.

                                                               WIPE TO:

               EXT. SPACE, OFF YORVATH

               The lush green planet plays unwilling host to a modest

               detachment from the dark fleet, just as Kenobi described: a

               massive destroyer with escort, another of the mysterious

               hulks, and significant transport traffic. 

               EXT. YORVATH - CONTINUOUS

               A vast landing field has been clear-cut amidst dense jungle.

               Transports ascend and descend. Herds of exotic animals are

               shepherded aboard the ships by troops of the dark army,

               wielding coercive apparatuses.

               Atop a distant ridge, still dense with trees and ground

               cover, a hooded figure in green camouflage observes the

               proceedings with weathered electro-binoculars. His face is

               concealed by his cowl, except for the tip of a protruding

               beak.

               Down in the landing field, a lone creature, of a larger

               species than the rest, easily ten feet tall, breaks free of

               its restraints and begins terrorizing troops, flinging bodies

               this way and that.

               The beast's handlers struggle to bring it under control as it

               inflicts damage upon a nearby transport. 

               And then another commotion from a hundred yards away -- an

               imposing figure with a bull-like head and crisp officer's

               dress stalks toward the fracas, also flinging troops out of

               his way, sometimes with his hands and sometimes without them.

               The Force.

               Reaching the raging animal, the bullheaded Jedi raises his

               arm and clenches his fist. The creature's knee twists and

               buckles. The dark Jedi raises his other hand, and the

               creature's second knee breaks.

               The escaped beast topples, and the stroke of a red lightsaber

               ends its life.

               The handlers line up at attention before their commander. He

               regards them angrily, and without a second thought, he

               executes them with another single swipe of his bright red

               weapon. 

               A row of bodies hit the ground almost simultaneously, but not

               before the dark Jedi has already turned his back and begun

               walking away.

               The figure atop the ridge lowers his binocs.

                                   HOODED FIGURE

                             (spit out like a curse)

                         Donzin Faal.

               EXT. HYPERSPACE - LATER

               The Falling Star barrels through the blue and white of

               hyperspace.

               INT. FALLING STAR, CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS - LATER

               The cabin is tiny but lavishly appointed. Kitch snores

               loudly, a mask over his eyes.

               INT. FALLING STAR, ENGINE ROOM - CONTINUOUS

               Two of Heph's droids play holochess.

               INT. FALLING STAR, MESSDECK - CONTINUOUS

               Alda and the gunners are playing a drinking game with

               battered chrome cards -- Alda and Gunner Three on one team

               and the other two gunners on the other.

               As Alda gloats over a winning hand, Manx sweeps by and steals

               the exotic bottle, pulling on its iridescent contents as she

               leaves.

               INT. FALLING STAR, HANGAR BAY - CONTINUOUS

               Heph, Anakin, and Forbee have opened up various parts of

               Anakin's fighter and are working away. Forbee's in the

               cockpit.

                                   HEPH

                         Beautiful bird. Don't make 'em like

                         this anymore. 

                             (peeling back a panel)

                         Clever what you've done here --

                         subbing the capacitor from a P3.

                                   ANAKIN

                         It was the closest fit I could

                         find, but it still took some doing.

                                   HEPH

                         I can see it. Autolaser?

                                   ANAKIN

                             (with pride)

                         Arc torch.

                                   HEPH

                         You did it manual?! That's a real

                         steady hand there, Skywalker.

               Anakin beams.

                                   HEPH (CONT'D)

                         How're the comms coming along

                         Forbs?

               Forbee flips a switch with a manipulator arm. His ensuing

               beeps and bleeps are audible over a PA in the hangar bay.

                                   HEPH (CONT'D)

                         All right. We can hear you.

                             (under his breath)

                         Brat.

               Forbee beeps his offense over the PA. Anakin laughs.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Hey, you think we can get more

                         output from the canon?

               Heph leaves what he's doing and walks over to take a peak.

                                   HEPH

                         Big gun not big enough for you?

                                   ANAKIN

                         Not even close. Seems like she's

                         got more in her, but I can't figure

                         it out.

                                   HEPH

                         Let me see here.

                             (peaking around with a

                              small penlight)

                         Ok. Ok. Might just have a couple

                         ideas ideating.

               Obi Wan approaches behind them.

                                   KENOBI

                         How's the restoration coming?

                                   ANAKIN

                         Oh hey, Obi Wan. We're just working

                         on the weapons systems.

                                   KENOBI

                         Good. You'll be wanting those at

                         peak performance. But put down your

                         tools for a moment, grab that

                         bucket, and come with me -- it's

                         time for your first lesson.

                                   ANAKIN

                         What lesson? We're kind of busy

                         right now. 

                                   KENOBI

                         Oh, I see. I suppose you can always

                         train to become a Jedi another

                         time.

               Anakin drops his tools. Heph looks only slightly less

               surprised.

               INT. FALLING STAR, AFT VIEWING DECK - LATER

               Silhouetted against the lights of hyperspace, Anakin and Obi

               Wan sit facing each other, a few feet between them, legs

               crossed.

               Anakin has Kitch's sleeping mask over his eyes. Obi Wan has

               the bucket in front of him. He pulls a small metal nut out of

               the bucket and throws it at Anakin's head.

               The nut hits Anakin squarely on the forehead.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Ow!

                                   KENOBI

                         Clear your mind. You're not

                         focusing.

               Kenobi throws another one off to the right of Anakin's head.

               Anakin ducks directly into it.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Damn it.

                                   KENOBI

                         Don't anticipate. Reach out with

                         your senses. Feel the space around

                         you. Feel the object move through

                         it.

                                   ANAKIN

                         That doesn't make any sense. How

                         can I feel what I'm not touching?

                                   KENOBI

                         The Force touches all things at all

                         times. If you are one with the

                         Force...

               Kenobi throws another nut. Another collision with Anakin's

               skull. Anakin tears off the mask.

                                   ANAKIN

                         I can't do this.

               Anakin stands and looks out at hyperspace.

                                   KENOBI

                         What's troubling you?

                                   ANAKIN

                         I... I just found out that my

                         parents aren't who I thought they

                         were...

                                   KENOBI

                         You wouldn't be the first Jedi to

                         have been born to farmers, but I'm

                         not surprised to hear it.

                                   ANAKIN

                         I have no idea who they are. Who I

                         am. And now...

                                   KENOBI

                         And now you are being introduced to

                         a world you didn't even know

                         existed.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Yeah, I mean the Force? I know it's

                         real -- I've seen it. But...

                                   KENOBI

                         Anakin, I am only teaching you to

                         control and strengthen a connection

                         you already have. You use the Force

                         every time you sit behind the

                         controls of a ship. You just don't

                         know it.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Maybe. I don't know.

                                   KENOBI

                         I wish I could tell you who your

                         parents were -- perhaps with a

                         little digging...

                         But, I can help you discover who

                         your are. No, not discover exactly.

                         Become.

               Anakin looks at Obi Wan.

                                   KENOBI (CONT'D)

                         Come, let's try again.

               Anakin takes a seat.

                                   KENOBI (CONT'D)

                         When you fought those gunships, how

                         were able to dodge their laser

                         fire?

                                   ANAKIN

                         I had my eyes open, that's for

                         sure.

                                   KENOBI

                         So you saw all those blasts with

                         your eyes, and then told your hands

                         to tell your fighter to roll this

                         way and then that?

                                   ANAKIN

                         No. No, it wasn't like that. It was

                         more like... instinct.

                                   KENOBI

                         Yes. Instinct. Intuition. Feeling.

                         That is the way of the Force. Now

                         put your blindfold back on and try

                         again.

               Anakin does. Kenobi throws a nut. Anakin tilts his head out

               of the way.

                                   KENOBI (CONT'D)

                         Good.

               Kenobi throws another. Anakin dodges again.

                                   KENOBI (CONT'D)

                         Yes, Anakin.

               Kenobi grabs a few more nuts in his hand and throws three in

               rapid succession. Anakin tilts his head side to side,

               avoiding the first two, but then the third stops in mid air

               and hovers right in front of him.

                                   KENOBI (CONT'D)

                             (taken aback)

                         Goodness, that was fast.

               Anakin slowly peels off the mask and watches the nut hover in

               front of him with wonder. Am I doing that?

               An alarm sounds, less urgent than the signal for an incoming

               attack, but more pressing than an alarm clock. The nut

               clatters to the floor.

               INT. FALLING STAR, CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS - CONTINUOUS

               Kitch snaps awake and bumps his head on a shelf. He reaches

               for his mask, but to his confusion, finds it has already been

               removed.

               Kitch splashes water on his face from a tiny sink and walks

               directly through a hatch to the ship's passageway, the hatch

               irising open at his approach and closing behind him.

               INT. FALLING STAR, PASSAGEWAY - CONTINUOUS

               A mere five steps take Kitch to the cockpit. Never far from

               the helm, this one.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Kitch slides into the captain's seat and pops off the alarm,

               then eases the ship out of lightspeed. The planet Yorvath

               hangs in the distance, the size of a tea saucer.

               Manx walks in and sits beside him, offering the bottle she

               grabbed from Alda. Kitch waves it off. Manx raises an

               eyebrow. Kitch reconsiders, grabs a tin mug off a console,

               and extends it. Manx pours.

                                   MANX

                         Kenobi's intelligence was good.

                         Scanners are showing a much smaller

                         force than we ran up against at

                         Jatari II. 

                                   KITCH

                         That's one potential disaster

                         averted.

               Kenobi enters the cockpit.

                                   KITCH (CONT'D)

                         Speak of the devil. Manx says your

                         intel checks out. So far.

               Kenobi hands a baffled Kitch his sleeping mask.

                                   KENOBI

                         Of course it does. I've alerted my

                         friend to our arrival. He should be

                         sending coordinates shortly.

                                   KITCH

                         Does his telepathy work on ships'

                         computers, because how...?

               A series of beeps.

                                   MANX

                         Coordinates received. He's on the

                         surface, well clear of those ships'

                         visual range. With our jammers, we

                         should be able to get to him

                         undetected.

               Kitch looks at Kenobi suspiciously.

                                   KENOBI

                         It wasn't the Force, old boy -- he

                         has a transponder.

               Kitch blinks.

                                   KENOBI (CONT'D)

                         What? He ran recon on the area, and

                         located a position suitable for a

                         covert rendezvous. We're Jedi

                         Knights, Renzo -- do you think we

                         know nothing of combat tactics?

                                   KITCH

                         Well, I've only ever met you. I'm

                         sure your friend will forgive me

                         for jumping to conclusions.

                                   KENOBI

                         Oh please.