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carlhollywood
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Star Wars Episode 1: A False Dawn
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14-Oct-2015, 1:10 PM

WIPE TO:

               INT. MOS EISLEY CANTINA - DAY

               The bustling bar with the motley patrons we all remember. A

               band -- unfamiliar -- sets up on stage.

               Alda Contana reclines against the bar, his arms around two

               females, one of them human. They share his pipe.

               In a booth, a bit of the inverse, as the three alien gunners

               vie for the attention of a single alien female, grotesque and

               bulbous with huge feminine eyelashes.

               In another booth, Kitch and Manx sit across from a pair of

               Jawas.

                                   CAPTAIN KITCH

                         No way I'm paying you up front,

                         boys -- and the fact that you even

                         proposed it makes me think you're

                         wasting my time.

               Incomprehensible squeaks and squeals from the Jawas.

                                   CAPTAIN KITCH (CONT'D)

                         You get a cut of the profits IF

                         your information proves accurate -

                         that's what!

               More Jawanese.

                                   CAPTAIN KITCH (CONT'D)

                         What choice do you have? Your hot

                         tip's worthless in a week. Maybe I

                         stiff you and maybe I don't, but

                         I'm your only shot at a payday.

                                   MANX

                         Come on, Cap. Let's get out of

                         here. Trying to bargain with Jawas

                         is like... well, it's like trying

                         to bargain with Jawas.

               Manx and Kitch move to stand. They're halted by more

               Jawanese.

                                   CAPTAIN KITCH

                         Ok. Glad you see it my way. Now

                         tell me about this military supply

                         convoy.

               Across the cantina, the band strikes up a tune. And through

               the front door walks Obi Wan Kenobi.

                                   KENOBI

                             (shouting across the room)

                         Renzo, my friend. There you are!

               The Jawas at Kitch's table scramble like it's a raid. Kenobi

               waltzes over and takes their seat.

                                   KENOBI (CONT'D)

                         Who were your friends, Renzo? They

                         seemed skittish. Hi, Manx.

                                   CAPTAIN KITCH

                         Kenobi.

                                   MANX

                         Hey, Obi Wan.

                                   CAPTAIN KITCH

                         What do you want?

                                   KENOBI

                         I just got this funny feeling --

                         you know how I get those sometimes 

                         - that you were going to leave

                         without me. But, we had an

                         agreement, so I certainly hope that

                         isn't true.

                                   CAPTAIN KITCH

                         We agreed to talk, Kenobi. And,

                         here we are talking, just like we

                         would have talked a couple of days

                         from now, if you had been a little

                         more patient and trusting.

                                   KENOBI

                         A conversation I'm sure we would

                         have had via communicator as you

                         left this planet's orbit.

                                   CAPTAIN KITCH

                         A conversation in which I would

                         have told you, good luck, and may

                         the Force...

                                   MANX

                         Be with you.

                                   CAPTAIN KITCH

                         That's it. But it's time to go our

                         separate ways. Because we have

                         pirating to do, and you probably

                         have something a little more

                         suicidal on your agenda.

               Heph suddenly appears at the table, pushing his way past

               patrons, with Forbee, looking much better, in tow. He doesn't

               immediately notice Kenobi.

                                   HEPH

                         Cap'n, Kenobi's on his way. I hope

                         you got what we need from those

                         Jawas, because we have to shove off

                         NOW.

               Kitch and Manx close their eyes and shake their heads. Forbee

               beeps and whirs at Heph, who looks down and sees Kenobi.

                                   HEPH (CONT'D)

                         Or else we'll never get back in

                         time to pick him up... you up.

                         And surprise you with our hold full

                         of riches.

                                   KENOBI

                             (looking at Kitch)

                         A couple of days from now, eh

                         Renzo? If I were more patient. And

                         trusting?

                                   HEPH

                         Yeah, in a couple of days. That's

                         right.

               Kitch looks Heph in the eye and shakes his head. Heph slumps

               in defeat and walks away.

                                   HEPH (CONT'D)

                         Sorry Kenobi. Nothing personal.

               Forbee beeps and whistles.

                                   HEPH (CONT'D)

                         I didn't have to fix your

                         vocalizers, you know?

               Exeuent Heph and Forbee.

                                   KITCH

                         Like he said. Nothing personal.

                                   MANX

                             (failing to conceal some

                              shame)

                         Yeah. Just business.

                                   KENOBI

                         I completely understand. After all

                         the things I've put you through.

                         And, as you so often remind me,

                         you're pirates -- hardly the type

                         to enlist in profitless adventures

                         for the common good.

                                   KITCH

                         Exactly.

                                   KENOBI

                         And yet, I do. Time after time.

                         Under false pretenses. Trying to

                         make heroes out of thieves and

                         cutthroats. Paying you in honor and

                         virtue, righteousness and justice,

                         when all you want are cold,

                         pitiless credits.

               The guilt trip is working on Manx, even though she can see it

               for the ploy that it is, but Kitch nods along happily.

                                   KITCH

                         Couldn't have said it better

                         myself.

                                   KENOBI

                         Which is why, this time, I've come

                         to you with an opportunity.

                                   KITCH

                         Here we go.

                                   KENOBI

                         A ship filled with valuable cargo.

                                   KITCH

                             (facetiously)

                         Why, that's right in our line!

                                   MANX

                         How'd you hear about this ship?

                                   KENOBI

                         Another Jedi. He's keeping an eye

                         on it for us, but we have to move

                         quickly.

                                   KITCH

                         That's a new wrinkle. Another

                         Kenobi. And I suppose there's

                         nothing in it for you and your

                         comrade, right? You're simply

                         trying to pay us back for all the

                         trouble you've caused over the

                         years. Or have you taken a sudden

                         interest in piracy?

                                   KENOBI

                         Of course, I have my reasons, but

                         it doesn't mean there's nothing in

                         it for you.

                                   KITCH

                         And what about your war? The big

                         one? The greatest threat of our

                         lifetimes?

                                   KENOBI

                         It's not going anywhere.

               And, then Anakin rushes in just like Heph, catching stares

               from the crowd of old crooks.

                                   ANAKIN

                             (out of breath)

                         Oh good. You found them.

                                   KENOBI

                             (playing dumb)

                         What are you doing here? This is no

                         place for a boy.

                                   ANAKIN

                         I wasn't sure you got the message.

                         I was afraid they'd take off before

                         you got here.

                                   KITCH

                         You got one of your feelings, eh

                         Kenobi?

                             (to Anakin)

                         You been sabotaging the repairs,

                         tadpole? How long ago could we have

                         left, huh?

                                   ANAKIN

                         You kidding me? You're a week ahead

                         of schedule thanks to me.

                                   KITCH

                         What's the angle there?

                                   KENOBI

                         Anakin, you should wait outside.

                                   ANAKIN

                             (to Kitch)

                         The angle is to get you ship-shape

                         as soon as possible. There's a

                         galaxy to save, or haven't you

                         heard?

                                   KENOBI

                         And wealth, Kitch -- you'll see.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Huh? You think the Senate will pay

                         you for bringing them evidence of

                         an invasion?

               Kitch stands, and Manx follows reluctantly.

                                   KITCH

                         I've heard enough.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Where are you going?

                                   KITCH

                         I've got a pair of Jawas to find.

                         Boys! Alda.

               Alda reluctantly leaves his darlings, ordering them a drink

               to ease the blow. The gunners reluctantly leave theirs,

               jockeying and shoving each other to get the last word.

               EXT. MOS EISLEY STREETS - MOMENTS LATER

               Kitch, Manx, Alda, and the gunners march down the street. Obi

               Wan and Anakin trot after them, catching up.

                                   KENOBI

                         I wasn't lying to you, Renzo. It's

                         all true. The ship. The Jedi. The

                         cargo.

                                   KITCH

                         The Senate. The evidence. The

                         invasion.

                                   KENOBI

                         I said I had my reasons.

                                   KITCH

                         And I have mine.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Ah, forget about him, Obi Wan, you

                         can do better.

                                   KITCH

                             (insulted)

                         You're welcome to try.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Plenty of crooks with ships in this

                         town.

                                   KITCH

                         None like the Star, and none with a

                         crew like mine.

                                   ANAKIN

                         What good's a solid ship and crack

                         crew, if you're a coward?

               Everybody stops. Kitch turns and closes on Anakin, putting a

               finger in his face.

                                   KITCH

                         Last person who called me a coward

                         has a pile of ashes where his face

                         used to be. And the fact that you

                         saved our skin out there is the

                         only thing keeping you from the

                         same fate.

               Anakin doesn't even flinch. Kitch turns to Kenobi.

                                   KITCH (CONT'D)

                         Tell me straight -- is there any

                         money in it?

                                   KENOBI

                         Not a credit.

                                   KITCH

                         I'll do it.

               Kitch strides off, his crew close behind. Alda is shaking his

               head.

                                   MANX

                             (sarcastically)

                         You showed them, Cap.

                                   KITCH

                         Shut up.

               Still standing in the street. Anakin raises his eyebrows at

               Kenobi. Obi Wan claps him on the back.

               EXT. PUDA'S SHIPYARD - NIGHT

               The crew boards the Falling Star. Kitch and Kenobi are the

               last aboard -- Kitch letting Kenobi on before him with an

               exaggerated bow.

               INT. LARS MOISTURE FARM, BOYS' ROOM - NIGHT

               Anakin lays in bed, staring up at the ceiling. He's wrestling

               with a thought, then he makes a decision.

               Anakin springs out of bed and begins dressing quietly.

               INT. LARS MOISTURE FARM, DINING ROOM - MINUTES LATER

               Anakin types the finishing touches of a letter on a datapad

               and puts it down gently on the table. 

               EXT. LARS MOISTURE FARM - MOMENTS LATER

               Anakin throws a pack in the speeder and jumps in behind it.

               He starts her up.

               INT. LARS MOISTURE FARM, PARENTS' ROOM - CONTINUOUS

               Hamish snores, but Arna's awake. She hears the sound of the

               speeder and smiles through her tears.

               EXT. TATOOINE, DESERT - MOMENTS LATER

               Anakin rockets across the sand in the landspeeder, he sheds a

               few tears of his own.

               EXT. BERU'S FARM - LATER

               Anakin's parked outside, knocking at Beru's window. She

               appears in night clothes and opens the window.

                                   BERU

                         Anakin, what are...?

               Anakin pulls her in for a deep kiss.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Good night, Beru.

               Anakin turns around and heads for the speeder.

                                   BERU

                         Anakin?

               EXT. PUDA'S SHIPYARD - LATER

               Anakin pulls up, grabs his pack and runs toward the dry dock.

               Turning a corner, he finds the Star... gone.

               Anakin throws his pack on the ground. Puda steps out of her

               office.

                                   PUDA

                         That Kenobi said you might show up.

                         If you hurry, you might catch them

                         before they jump.

               She nods towards the hot rod, parked in the hangar, door now

               open.

                                   ANAKIN

                         I might not be able to bring her

                         back.

                                   PUDA

                         She's yours, kiddo. Belonged to

                         your mom. Hamish nearly busted a

                         thruster when I told him you

                         started fixing her up, but you've

                         always had a ship-sense -- figures

                         you'd recognize your own craft.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Arna?!

                                   PUDA

                         No, your real mom. 

                                   ANAKIN

                         What are you talking about? My real

                         parents were farmers.

                                   PUDA

                         Don't know who they were kid, but

                         they weren't from around here, and

                         they sure as hell weren't farmers. 

                                   ANAKIN

                         But...

                                   PUDA

                         Get going! I'll get that speeder

                         back home for you.

               Anakin nods.

               EXT. TATOOINE, SKIES - MINUTES LATER

               Anakin's ship climbs fast, leaving the surface below.

               INT. ANAKIN'S SHIP, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Anakin's face shows a confusion of determination, regret,

               elation, and uncertainty.