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Star Wars Episode 1: A False Dawn
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14-Oct-2015, 1:07 PM

 CUT TO:

               EXT. SPACE, OFF TATOOINE - SOMETIME LATER

               A tow ship slowly approaches the Falling Star.

               INT. TOW SHIP  - CONTINUOUS

               Puda, a fat female alien, and Anakin's boss, pilots the tow.

                                   PUDA

                             (on comms)

                         Commencing tow. You'll be ankle

                         deep in sand in no time.

               Puda hits a button - the hiss of de-coupling.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF TATOOINE - CONTINUOUS

               Four repulsor lift drones detach from housing in the tow's

               hull.

               INT. TOW SHIP - CONTINUOUS

                                   PUDA

                         And tell Anakin I appreciate the

                         business, but if he thinks he's

                         getting off easy, he's got another

                         thing coming.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF TATOOINE - CONTINUOUS

               The four drones thrust over to the Falling Star and attach

               themselves to the hull. They power on, and the ship rights

               its tilt.

               The tow positions its aft in front of the Falling Star and

               engages a tractor beam. Forward thrust, and the two ships

               make for Tatooine.

               EXT. TATOOINE SKIES - MINUTES LATER

               The two ships descend through the atmosphere, rocks and dunes

               visible below, and beyond that, the port of Mos Eisley.

               INT. TOW SHIP - CONTINUOUS

                                   PUDA

                             (on comms)

                         That's Mos Eisley up ahead at one

                         o'clock. My shipyard's just on the

                         edge of town. And the rest is

                         desert. Welcome to Tatooine.

               EXT. TATOOINE SKIES - CONTINUOUS

               The ships begin their descent over Mos Eisley.

                                                               WIPE TO:

               EXT. PUDA'S SHIPYARD - DAY

               The sky is a sharp blue, and the twin suns set the sand and

               stone ablaze. Ships and hangar stalls in various states of

               repair are littered about in a seemingly random arrangement.

               From a slight remove, Obi Wan watches Anakin and Beru watch

               Puda slide a hangar door shut on the hot rod fighter and lock

               it. The kid looks disappointed. 

                                   PUDA

                             (to Anakin)

                         If it weren't for the intervention

                         of Mr. Kitch, you'd be out of a

                         job. So quit sulking.

                                   ANAKIN

                         But you should have seen me out

                         there. And not a scratch on her.

                         Why are you even letting me fix her

                         up if I can't fly her?

                                   PUDA

                         But that's just it, sonny - I'm not

                         letting you fix her up.

               Puda exits on that one while Anakin turns to Beru dumbstruck 

               - but she just walks off on him too.

               Obi Wan turns his head and as he begins walking, he's joined

               by Kitch.

                                   KENOBI

                         Dry type of planet, eh?

                                   CAPTAIN KITCH

                         Three weeks, Kenobi. And forty

                         thousand dactaries. 

               Kitch and Kenobi stroll past the Falling Star where Heph and

               his droids, including a barely repaired Forbee, are

               inspecting the damage.

                                   KENOBI

                         At least you don't have to pay for

                         labor.

                                   CAPTAIN KITCH

                         This planet isn't so bad for a

                         night or two, but I hadn't planned

                         on moving here.

                                   KENOBI

                         Listen, I'm sorry Renzo, old

                         friend. Truly. I'll pay for the

                         repairs if that's what you want.

                                   CAPTAIN KITCH

                         Ha. Unlikely.

               But Kitch seems to accept the apology.

                                   KENOBI

                         Do you know what you're going to do

                         three weeks from now?

                                   CAPTAIN KITCH

                         I have some ideas. Most of them

                         don't involve you. 

                             (holding up a fist)

                         SOME of them DO.

                                   KENOBI

                         I understand how you feel. But

                         remember what I said about what's

                         coming.

               Anakin approaches.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Do you know where you're staying

                         yet?

               Kitch looks at Kenobi, then at Anakin.

                                   ANAKIN (CONT'D)

                         I have a cot here, but I think I'm

                         heading home -- keep clear of Puda

                         for awhile. It's a ways out, not

                         much of a place, just a moisture

                         farm, but you'd be welcome.

                                   KITCH

                         Kind offer, my lad, but I've got

                         quarters aboard ship, and I like to

                         stay close to the cantina.

                                   ANAKIN

                             (disappointed)

                         Oh.

                                   KENOBI

                         I'll take you up on the offer. A

                         home-cooked meal sounds delightful.

                                   ANAKIN

                             (wary)

                         Oh, ok. Great. 

                                   KENOBI

                         Well, Kitch, old boy. I suppose

                         it's goodbye for now. Remember what

                         I said.

                                   KITCH

                         I remember, Kenobi. We'll talk.

                                   KENOBI

                         Good. Good man.

                                   KITCH

                             (under his breath, as he

                              walks away)

                         When we're both old and gray.

                                                               WIPE TO:

               EXT. TATOOINE, DESERT - SOMETIME LATER

               Anakin pilots a land speeder, much like the one his son will

               someday own, but an older model. Beru sits in the passenger

               seat, Obi Wan in the back.

               Wind and sand blow in their faces -- only Kenobi seems to

               mind, though Anakin is aided by a pair of goggles.

                                   ANAKIN

                         You've got to start talking to me

                         sometime, Beru.

               Beru raises an eyebrow.

                                   ANAKIN (CONT'D)

                         They might have died if we hadn't

                         lent a hand.

                                   BERU

                         WE might have died! To save a bunch

                         of... 

                                   KENOBI

                         Pirates.

                                   BERU

                         Exactly!

                                   KENOBI

                         Well, not me, but all the rest --

                         quite notorious actually.

                                   BERU

                         That's just great.

                                   ANAKIN

                         I didn't know that at the time, ok?

               The speeder comes to a halt at a moisture farm -- adobe

               domiciles, a sunken courtyard, strange equipment and droids

               scattered about. It's similar to, but definitely not THAT,

               moisture farm.

               Beru gets out of the speeder, starts walking home.

                                   ANAKIN (CONT'D)

                         Can I pick you up next week?

               Beru stops walking but doesn't turn around.

                                   ANAKIN (CONT'D)

                         No dogfights this time, I promise.

                         Me and some of the guys are gonna

                         drag race speeders -- thought you

                         might want to ride along.

               Beru looks at Anakin, a smile coming reluctantly to her lips,

               and she nods.

                                   ANAKIN (CONT'D)

                             (slapping the steering

                              wheel)

                         All right!

               Anakin guns it more than is really necessary and makes a

               dramatic exit. Despite herself, Beru's smitten.

               Back in the speeder, Kenobi leans forward.

                                   KENOBI

                         You know, young Skywalker, you may

                         have acted rashly, but you saved

                         more than just a few freebooters.

                                   ANAKIN

                         You mean you? Why, what's your

                         story?

                                   KENOBI

                         In due time. Suffice it to say that

                         the whole galaxy may be thanking

                         you before long.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Oh brother. I'm gonna get a

                         mouthful from Hamish as is, and now

                         I'm bringing home some crazy bum.

               Kenobi just laughs.

                                                               WIPE TO:

               EXT. LARS MOISTURE FARM - NIGHT

               The speeder is parked outside Luke Skywalker's future home.

               INT. LARS MOISTURE FARM, DINING ROOM - CONTINUOUS

               A very awkward dinner. Hamish Lars, large and imposing, sits

               at the head of the table, his wife Arna to his right. Across

               from Arna, sitting next to each other are Anakin and Owen

               Lars, a boy approximately Anakin's age.

               Kenobi is seated opposite Hamish, eating with gusto. Everyone

               else seems a little tense.

                                   OWEN

                         So, did you do it?

                                   ANAKIN

                         No.

               Owen seems relieved.

                                   HAMISH

                         Do what now?

                                   ANAKIN

                         Nothing.

                                   HAMISH

                         I've decided I don't want you

                         spending so much time at the

                         shipyard.

                                   ANAKIN

                         But, I'm already grounded!

                                   HAMISH

                         And lucky you didn't get a beating

                         too. Mos Eisley's a bad influence

                         on you.

                                   ANAKIN

                         We could use the credits.

                                   HAMISH

                         Mind's made up. Need another hand

                         around the farm anyway. Put your

                         skills to use on our equipment

                         instead of just starships.

               Anakin's face falls. Arna looks at him sympathetically. A bit

               of an awkward silence. Kenobi slurps his stew with relish,

               and everyone looks his way.

                                   KENOBI

                         Delicious stew, Mrs. Skywalker.

                                   ARNA

                         Oh, thank you -- and it's Lars,

                         Arna Lars.

                                   KENOBI

                         I see -- so Anakin's not yours?

                                   HAMISH

                         He's ours.

                                   KENOBI

                         Of course, my apologies.

                                   HAMISH

                         So, Mr. Kenobi, you were onboard

                         this merchant ship that Anakin

                         rescued?

                                   KENOBI

                             (spoon constantly moving

                              from bowl to mouth)

                         Merchant ship... That's right.

                         You've got quite the pilot on your

                         hands. 

                                   HAMISH

                         You don't look like a merchant.

                                   KENOBI

                         Mm.

                                   HAMISH

                         What do you do then?

                                   KENOBI

                         Jedi Knight.

               Anakin puts his head in his hand. Owen spits out his drink.

                                   HAMISH

                         Very funny. Suppose it's none of my

                         business, though I would like to

                         know how long you plan on staying.

                                   KENOBI

                         About three weeks, if it's all

                         right with you. I doubt I'll find

                         food this good anywhere in town.

               Everyone looks surprised.

                                   HAMISH

                         Out here we work for our meals. You

                         ever worked a moisture farm?

                                   KENOBI

                         I've never even seen one! And I'm

                         afraid I'll be quite busy while I'm

                         here.

               Hamish begins to fume.

                                   KENOBI (CONT'D)

                             (hastily)

                         But, if the opportunity to help out

                         in some way presents itself, I most

                         certainly will. Perhaps I can be of

                         some use around the kitchen.

                                   HAMISH

                         Now look here!

                                   ARNA

                         Stay as long as you like Mr.

                         Kenobi. We're not as desperate as

                         all that.

               Hamish balls up his napkin, pushes back his chair and takes

               his leave.

                                   HAMISH

                         I'm finished.

               EXT. LARS MOISTURE FARM - NIGHT

               Bright stars illuminate the desert night. A small, strange

               lizard-like creature does a few pushups and skitters off

               across the sand.

               INT. LARS MOISTURE FARM, BOYS' ROOM - CONTINUOUS

               Anakin and Owen lay in adjacent beds. Anakin stares up at the

               ceiling.

                                   OWEN

                             (whispering)

                         You think he's really a Jedi?

                                   ANAKIN

                         Of course not. Jedi aren't real,

                         and if they were, what would a Jedi

                         be doing hanging around Tatooine of

                         all places with a bunch of pirates?

                                   OWEN

                         You said they were merchants!!

                                   ANAKIN

                         Don't you say a word, Owen -- I'm

                         in big enough trouble as it is.

                                   OWEN

                         I should tell father.

               Anakin sits up, delivers a threatening stare.

                                   OWEN (CONT'D)

                         But I won't. I promise.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Even if he let me go back to the

                         shipyard, Puda won't let me

                         anywhere near that fighter.

                                   OWEN

                         Why don't you just forget it?

                                   ANAKIN

                         Why don't you just forget Beru?

               That shuts Owen up for a second.

                                   ANAKIN (CONT'D)

                         I gotta get off this planet or I'll

                         just die. Maybe Captain Kitch will

                         take me with him.

                                   OWEN

                         You swear you didn't kiss her?

                                   ANAKIN

                         Geez, Owen, believe me, if I had,

                         you'd know about it. Good night.

               Anakin lays back down.

                                   OWEN

                         Good night, Anakin.

               Anakin's eyes don't close.

                                                               WIPE TO:

               EXT. SPACE, THE JATARI SYSTEM

               The dark fleet hangs like a kettle of vultures above the

               carcass of Jatari II. There is no more traffic between the

               fleet and the planet.

               EXT. JATARI II, SURFACE - DAY

               A pale officer flanked by a few troops surveys his

               surroundings as he approaches a dark transport. He walks

               through something reminiscent of a frontier town, but larger 

               - rusted steel in place of wood, orange moss in the street

               instead of dust, a deep blue river nearby.

               The town is battle-scarred, smoke clouding the atmosphere,

               but what really stands out is that it is absolutely empty --

               a ghost town.

               INT. ROHN'S DESTROYER, PASSAGEWAY - MOMENTS LATER

               Otto Rohn strides forcefully through the bustling corridor,

               past nearly identical crewman, bald and pale. 

               An officer appears at his side, via hologram projected from a

               hovering disk. He's maybe the same one as before, or maybe

               another. They certainly look similar -- white-skinned,

               hairless, seam down the face, subhuman.

                                   OFFICER

                         Jatari II has been milked dry,

                         Commander.

                                   ROHN

                         Good.

                                   OFFICER

                         Orders, sir?

                                   ROHN

                         The fleet remains here until

                         further notice. Production is to

                         continue at maximum rate.

                                   OFFICER

                         And then, commander?

                                   ROHN

                         That is all.

               The officer, dismissed, blinks off as Rohn approaches a door

               guarded by armed soldiers. The guards step aside as the doors

               hiss open and Rohn passes through.

               INT. INVADER CAPITAL SHIP, HOLO-COMMUNICATION DECK -

               CONTINUOUS

               The doors shut behind Rohn as he presents himself before the

               holoprojector. A gigantic holographic bust appears, but we do

               not see the face -- only the blue glow on Rohn's.

                                   ROHN

                         High Suzerain.

                                   HIGH SUZERAIN PRIME (O.S.)

                         Commander Rohn. Please report.

                                   ROHN

                         Jatari II has been exhausted.

                         Resources lost in the conflict:

                         under ten percent. Casualties:

                         under two percent. A highly

                         efficient conquest.

                                   HIGH SUZERAIN PRIME (O.S.)

                         Excellent.

               Rohn bows his head.

                                   HIGH SUZERAIN PRIME (CONT'D)

                         What is it?

               Rohn takes a knee.

                                   ROHN

                         We were reconnoitered, High

                         Suzerain. A Jedi. We sent our

                         Hawkers in pursuit, but he escaped.

                                   HIGH SUZERAIN PRIME (O.S.)

                         I see.

                                   ROHN

                             (eyes on the floor)

                         I am sorry for my failure.

                                   HIGH SUZERAIN PRIME (O.S.)

                         Yours is not the first such report.

                         Yet it matters little.

               Rohn looks up, encouraged.

                                   HIGH SUZERAIN PRIME (O.S.) (CONT'D) 

                         What can the Jedi do with this

                         knowledge, what little they may

                         have learned? You know as well as I

                         their fecklessness. Scattered,

                         disorganized, weak.

                                   ROHN

                         But, if they were to gather. If

                         they were to alert the Republic.

                                   HIGH SUZERAIN PRIME (O.S.)

                         By the time that ponderous order of

                         fools assembled there would be no

                         one left to alert. And who would

                         listen to them if they did -- a

                         rabble of disgraced drifters?

                                   ROHN

                         Of course, you are right, High

                         Suzerain.

                                   HIGH SUZERAIN PRIME (O.S.)

                         Fear not -- our forces are ready at

                         last. The time has almost come. You

                         need only wait for Commander Faal

                         to finish on Yorvath.

                                   ROHN

                         Faal is a buffoon.

                                   HIGH SUZERAIN PRIME

                         Perhaps, but you will be glad of

                         his reinforcements. For, I have

                         chosen you, my brother, to take

                         Alderaan.

               EXT. LARS MOISTURE FARM - EARLY MORNING

               Owen is perched atop a mobile surface-mositure extractor --

               looks a like a futuristic John Deere with water tanks on the

               back. Anakin kneels next to it with a tool box at his side.

               Slamming shut the engine cover, Anakin rises to his feet. 

                                   ANAKIN

                         Try it now.

               Owen tries the ignition and the machine whines to life,

               hovering inches off the ground. He reaches out to Owen for a

               bottle of water, and Owen passes it over. As he drinks, he

               watches Kenobi leave the domicile and walk out into the

               desert.

                                   OWEN

                         Where do you think he goes all day?

                         There's nothing out there.

                                   ANAKIN

                         I don't know, but today's the day I

                         find out.

                                   OWEN

                         You can't. Hamish'll kill you.

                                   ANAKIN

                         He won't be back from Tosche

                         Station until nightfall, and

                         besides, the extractor's fixed

                         isn't it?

               Anakin runs inside and emerges with a long blaster on his

               shoulder and a long scarf wrapped around his face. Owen

               shakes his head.

               Anakin waves cheerily as he sets off.