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carlhollywood
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Star Wars Episode 1: A False Dawn
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14-Oct-2015, 1:06 PM

  WIPE TO:

               INT. FALLING STAR, MESSDECK - SOMETIME LATER

               The entire crew of the Falling Star is assembled, standing

               around, leaning on walls and counters. 

               Obi Wan is in the center of the room, seated with his feet up

               on the dining table. Now that we have time to look, we can

               see that his clothes, though flamboyant, are worn and dirty. 

               Captain Kitch paces back and forth in front of him.

                                   KITCH

                         That was some fancy work with those

                         two heavy gunners, I'll give you

                         that...

               There is some muttering among the less senior crew - "That

               was Kenobi?" "He's a Jedi, don't ya know?"

                                   KITCH (CONT'D)

                         But a little too little, a little

                         too late, don't you think? 

                                   KENOBI

                         I thought it was just right.

                                   KITCH

                         I was a lot more impressed with

                         Alda's contribution.

               Some "hear, hears" and back slaps. Alda nods in

               acknowledgment.

                                   KENOBI

                         Yes, well, he had cannons. Look

                         here Kitch, I owe you and your crew

                         an apology...

                                   ALDA

                         Nearly got us all killed!

               One of Heph's droids beeps in agreement.

                                   KENOBI

                         Indeed. Myself included. And for

                         that I'm deeply regretful, but...

                                   KITCH

                         But nothing! I swear Kenobi, I've

                         had enough of you. When we land,

                         it's good bye. Forever.

                                   KENOBI

                         Kitch, old friend...

                                   KITCH

                         It's always the same with you. "I

                         just need a ride, Kitch, old

                         friend. Nothing to worry about -- 

                         nothing you can't handle."

                                   KENOBI

                         Don't forget...

                                   KITCH

                         "Don't forget about that time on

                         Seppik." How could I, with you

                         reminding me all the time! Well,

                         that's it! This time it's gone too

                         far. Did you see the size of that

                         fleet?! And the ships, they were

                         so... pointy. 

                                   KENOBI

                         What were they doing there?

                                   KITCH

                         Picking that poor planet's bones,

                         looked like. And we were next on

                         the menu.

                                   KENOBI

                         Yes, but why?

                                   KITCH

                         I don't know, and I don't care. I'm

                         a pirate, Kenobi. I steal things

                         for a living. You're the Jedi. That

                         sort of business, well it's your

                         business. And as long as we're

                         asking questions: why are you

                         sitting? It's my ship. I should be

                         the one sitting!

                                   KENOBI

                         By all means, sit.

                                   KITCH

                         Don't you tell me what to do.

               Kenobi rises abruptly.

                                   KENOBI

                         Then stand. And listen to me.

                         You're right. That fleet is my

                         business, and dark business it is.

                         I don't know what they were doing

                         out there on Jatari II, but I heard

                         disturbing rumors, I had to

                         investigate, and I needed you to

                         give me a ride. The truth turned

                         out to be much worse than I

                         imagined. Yes, that fleet was

                         massive. And extremely pointy. And

                         unless I'm sorely mistaken that was

                         but one of many. Did you see that

                         one vessel - the giant with all the

                         transport traffic? What do you

                         think it was?

                                   KITCH

                         Looked like a cargo ship to me. A

                         repository for all their loot.

                                   KENOBI

                         The transports were filled with

                         people.

               Some frowns from the crew of The Falling Star - Manx in

               particular.

                                   KITCH

                             (darkly)

                         A slave ship, then.

                                   KENOBI

                         Maybe. But I fear it's worse than

                         that. And I felt a presence on

                         their flagship - the Dark Side of

                         the Force.

                                   KITCH

                         See. Jedi problems. All the more

                         reason to leave us honest thieves

                         out of it.

                                   KENOBI

                         Kitch, you fool, if that fleet was

                         just part of an armada and they're

                         in league with fallen members of my

                         order, there won't be any staying

                         out of it. It'll be war.

                                   KITCH

                         And? War's good for business.

                                   KENOBI

                         You've never seen war like this

                         Kitch and neither have I. If I'm

                         right...

                                   KITCH

                         If...

               An alarm sounds.

                                   MANX

                         Approaching our destination,

                         Captain.

                                   KITCH

                         We'll discuss this further after we

                         land, Kenobi.

               Kitch and Manx make for the cockpit, and Kenobi follows.

               INT. FALLING STAR, PASSAGEWAY - CONTINUOUS

               Kitch and Manx walk briskly, followed by Kenobi.

                                   KENOBI

                         That's another thing, Kitch. Those

                         heavy gunners they sent after us...

                                   KITCH

                         The ones we blew up?

                                   KENOBI

                         Your two, my two -- that leaves two

                         more. I think they know where we're

                         headed.

                                   MANX

                         No way. They could never guess.

                         It's a real backwater, and not the

                         closest. It ain't the most likely

                         place for us to dock, and not the

                         least likely either, if you follow

                         me. Drop of water in the ocean. 

                                   KITCH

                         Grain of sand in the desert more

                         like.

                                   KENOBI

                         I don't think they're guessing. I

                         think we're being tracked.

                                   KITCH

                         Impossible. Can't track a ship

                         through hyperspace.

               WHOOSH. The lock to the cockpit irises open.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Kitch and Manx take their seats and start prepping for

               deceleration from light speed. Kenobi stands behind them.

                                   KENOBI

                         Kitch. Battle stations and shields

                         up. That's all I'm suggesting.

                                   KITCH

                         Noted.

                                   KENOBI

                         When have I lead you astray?

               Kitch gives Kenobi the eyeball of all eyeballs.

                                   KENOBI (CONT'D)

                         Fine. I'm going back to the aft

                         viewing deck. Just in case you need

                         me to save your hind quarters.

                         Again.

               Obi Wan departs, the lock closing behind him.

                                   KITCH

                         Save our hind quarters. Pain in the

                         hind quarters.

               Kitch eases them out of light speed, the blue streaks in the

               viewport contracting into stars, the view in front of them

               dominated by the planet of Tatooine -- dead center.

                                   KITCH (CONT'D)

                         Nicely done, Manx. Right on target.

                                   MANX

                         Thank you, Capt...

               BOOM. BOOM. BOOM.

               INT. FALLING STAR, MESSDECK - CONTINUOUS

               The crew staggers, rocked by the explosions, gunners dropping

               the bags of ice they were holding to their heads. Everyone

               scatters to their posts.

                                   KITCH (O.S.)

                         Battle stations!

               INT. FALLING STAR, PASSAGEWAY - CONTINUOUS

               Kenobi stumbles, then double-times it. 

                                   KENOBI

                         That was quick.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF TATOOINE - CONTINUOUS

               One of the hawkers pummels the Falling Star as the other

               emerges from hyperspace.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Kitch and Manx take evasive action, Tatooine swerving wildly

               in the viewport.

                                   KITCH

                             (through clenched teeth)

                         Kenobi. When he's wrong it's bad

                         news, and when he's right, it's

                         even worse.

               INT. FALLING STAR, PASSAGEWAY - CONTINUOUS

               The swivel gunners hustle toward their stations. Gunner One

               opens the air lock leading to his turret, and FOOM - a ball

               of fire knocks him back into his comrades.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF TATOOINE - CONTINUOUS

               The remnants of one of the Falling Star's gun turrets burns

               while a hawker hits a second with a burst of laser fire.

               Hawker Two targets the rear thrusters. And connects.

               INT. FALLING STAR, ENGINE ROOM - CONTINUOUS

               One of Heph's droids, 4B-T1, is blown apart as a section of

               the ship's engine explodes.

                                   HEPH

                         Forbee!!

               The engines are rocked by more explosions, knocking Heph to

               the ground. Struggling to his feet, he grabs a nearby droid

               under his arm and runs for the air lock.

                                   HEPH (CONT'D)

                         Give it up, boys. It's no good.

               INT. FALLING STAR, PASSAGEWAY - CONTINUOUS

               Heph makes it out and stands by the lock, ushering a stream

               of droids out past him.

                                   HEPH

                         That's it. Hurry it up now.

               When the last droid makes its exit. Heph rushes back in and

               reappears moments later holding the remains of his droid. He

               punches a switch, and the lock slams shut. He punches

               another.

                                   HEPH (CONT'D)

                         Cap'n. Too hot in there. We're

                         sunk. Dead in the ether.

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               Through the viewport, Tatooine drifts slowly past.

                                   KITCH

                         I noticed.

               He takes a moment to strap in. Manx follows suit.

                                   KITCH (CONT'D)

                         All hands, brace for impact.

               Kitch looks at Manx. She grabs his hand tightly.

               INT. FALLING STAR, AFT VIEWING DECK - CONTINUOUS

               Kenobi runs in, presses his face against the glass, and scans

               around for the hawkers. Nothing. Then, suddenly they buzz

               past, and just like that, they're out of sight again.

                                   KENOBI

                         Damn.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF TATOOINE - CONTINUOUS

               The hawkers put some distance between themselves and the

               Falling Star, then form up for a lethal run on the listing

               ship.

               They begin their approach.

               INT. FALLING STAR, AFT VIEWING DECK - CONTINUOUS

               As Obi Wan looks out into space, his hands pressed against

               the glass, a third fighter screams past.

                                   KENOBI

                         Hey!

               Kenobi scrambles for a new vantage.

               INT. FALLING STAR, PASSAGEWAY - CONTINUOUS

               Kenobi finds a small portal in the passageway, and there's

               the fighter -- and it looks like it's about to engage the

               hawkers!

               INT. FALLING STAR, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

                                   MANX

                         Cap! On the scanner...

                                   KITCH

                         I see it.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF TATOOINE - CONTINUOUS

               The fighter, a real hot rod of a ship, though a little junky,

               beelines for the hawkers, taking a position right on their

               tails.

               The hot rod lets loose with a sustained beam, heating up the

               wing on one of the hawkers, blowing out a thruster. The

               gunships break off in different directions.

               INT. FALLING STAR, PASSAGEWAY

               Kenobi watches through the portal as the dogfight continues.

                                   KENOBI

                         The force is strong with that one.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF TATOOINE - CONTINUOUS

               The hot rod pursues the damaged hawker, following it into a

               steep dive. The second hawker joins them, appearing on the

               hot rod's six.

               The second hawker fires at the hot rod, but the agile

               starfighter avoids the incoming fire with assured poise,

               maintaining its position behind the first hawker. Then the

               hot rod fires it's beam cannon again. The first hawker's tail

               glows a deep orange, as the particle beam burns the hull. 

               INT. HAWKER TWO, COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS

               The pale pilot, a dead ringer for the rest of the dark

               fleet's personnel, lines up a shot on the hot rod -- his

               targeting display locking on.

                                   HAWKER PILOT

                         You're finished.

               But, suddenly the first hawker explodes, and the hot rod

               disappears into the blast. And then the second hawker's

               viewing panel is obscured by the same explosion, as it too

               passes through, and a moment later when the flames clear --

               the lone starfighter is heading straight for him.

               EXT. SPACE, OFF TATOOINE - CONTINUOUS

               The hawker opens fire, but the fighter craft swings wide and

               pivots, nailing the hawker with its beam for a few moments

               before the heavier ship can change course.

               And then, the fight's over. It's just the hot rod, The

               Falling Star, and some black debris.

               INT. FALLING STAR, PASSAGEWAY - MINUTES LATER

               Kitch and Manx stride briskly down a corridor. The captain

               steals a glance down at his first mate's hand, hitched on her

               belt, as she walks. Manx notices, frowns, blushes. Kitch

               pretends not to see.

               An airlock opens in front of them.

               INT. FALLING STAR, HANGAR BAY - CONTINUOUS

               The rest of the crew is watching the hot rod dock, cheering

               and applauding its arrival. On close inspection the ship

               really is a junker -- beautiful in its day, but that was a

               long time ago.

               Kenobi, at the back of the crowd, turns to face Kitch and

               Manx as they approach.

                                   KITCH

                         Not a word. Remember who got us

                         into this mess in the first place.

               Kenobi nods -- fair enough -- and turns his attention to the

               starfighter.

                                   KITCH (CONT'D)

                         More than a little curious about

                         our savior though.

                                   KENOBI

                         That makes two of us.

               The cockpit glass is tinted, and the crew strains to make out

               the pilot. The canopy begins to open and the cheering

               crescendos, and then, doesn't die off exactly, but...

               In the pilot's seat is teenaged girl who looks like a

               farmer's daughter. And she seems pissed.

               The girl pushes herself out of the cockpit and climbs down

               awkwardly, revealing behind her, a teenaged boy, Anakin

               Skywalker -- an only slightly less likely pilot. She must

               have been sitting on his lap.

               When the girl, Beru, hits the ground, she stalks right past

               the confused crew and out of the hangar bay.

               Anakin hits the floor a second later.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Beru! Hey Beru, don't be like that.

                         I'm sorry!

               Beru appears again, walking in the exact opposite direction,

               and pauses in front of Anakin only long enough to deliver a

               withering slap, before turning on her heals and leaving

               again.

               The crew of the Falling Star watch her go and then turn back

               to regard Anakin, dumbstruck, in the middle of the hangar

               bay. Everyone breaks out into sudden, raucous laughter.

               Anakin rubs the back of his head and smiles sheepishly.

               INT. FALLING STAR, MESSDECK - SOMETIME LATER

               A jovial scene, the crew, minus Manx, drinking and laughing,

               mugs in every hand except Anakin's. He's seated at the head

               of the table, quite happy to be the center of attention, but

               a little overwhelmed.

                                   KITCH

                         Joyriding!??

                                   ANAKIN

                         I've been dying to get behind the

                         controls of that ship ever since I

                         can remember.

                                   KITCH

                         And your pretty friend with the

                         temper?

                                   ANAKIN

                         I was trying to impress her. Me and

                         a pal have a bet to see who can

                         kiss her first.

                                   KITCH

                             (cackling)

                         I think he just won.

                                   ANAKIN

                             (dejected)

                         I think you might be right.

               Kenobi, seated at the other end of the table savoring his

               drink in silence, leans forward.

                                   KENOBI

                         Whatever possessed you to attack

                         those ships?

                                   ANAKIN

                         Well, I don't know. I saw the

                         trouble, and Beru was yelling at me

                         to turn around, but I could see you

                         needed help. And...

                                   KENOBI

                         And...

                                   ANAKIN

                         And I knew I could take 'em.

               Alda shakes his head as he packs his pipe.

                                   ALDA

                         Unbelievable. Kid's first time up.

                         Never been in a fight. Never

                         trained. Girlfriend sitting on his

                         bleedin' lap.

                                   KENOBI

                         And never had any doubt.

                                   ANAKIN

                         Well, I was worried the gun might

                         not work. I never tried it!

                                   KITCH

                             (laughing)

                         That calls for a drink!

               Heph slams a frothing mug down in front of Anakin. Anakin

               hesitates.

                                   KITCH (CONT'D)

                         That's good stuff, tadpole. From

                         the governor of Malorin's private

                         stock.

                                   ANAKIN

                         How'd you get it?

                                   KITCH

                         The governor used to keep quite a

                         collection aboard his yacht.

                                   ALDA

                             (smirking)

                         Used to keep a yacht.

               Anakin gulps, sips at his drink, coughs, then takes a good

               long swig, wiping the liquid from his lips with the back of

               his hand. Heph claps him on the back so hard he almost spills

               his drink. More laughs.

               Manx enters the messdeck. The room quiets slightly.

                                   MANX

                         She'll be fine. She's taking a nap.

                         Gave her quite a scare, kid.

                                   ANAKIN

                         I'm sorry about that.

                                   MANX

                         Don't apologize to me. I'm just

                         sorry for you that she's not as

                         impressed as I am. Somebody hand me

                         a cup!

               Cheers again, and the clanking of mugs.

                                   HEPH

                         Not to darken the mood none, but I

                         should remind you we're still dead

                         in the water here. Drifting.

                         I can start repairs, but we're

                         going to need to dock planetside

                         for a major overhaul, and I can't

                         promise it won't be a rough

                         landing.

                                   ANAKIN

                         I work at a shipyard -- the best in

                         Mos Eisley! I'll call my boss, and

                         she'll give you a tow no problem.

                         You got dactaries, right?

                                   ALIEN GUNNER THREE

                         Course we do, we're a bloody pirate

                         ship!

                                   ANAKIN

                         P-Pirates?

                                   KITCH

                             (chuckling)

                         Fortune smiles on us today. Let me

                         shake your hand, tadpole.

                             (extending a hand)

                         Captain Renzo Kitch of the Falling

                         Star. Perhaps you've heard of me.

                                   ANAKIN

                             (taking Kitch's hand)

                         Can't say I have, mister, but I

                         don't hear much all the way out

                         here. Anakin Skywalker, and I'm

                         pleased to meet you all the same --

                         this is absolutely the most

                         exciting thing that's ever happened

                         to me.

               Kitch'll take it.

                                   KENOBI

                         Skywalker -- that's a fitting name.

               Obi Wan looks hard at Anakin, assessing. Anakin squirms a

               little under his gaze, but Beru walks in tentatively and the

               tension breaks. She looks at the alien gunners with suspicion

               as she passes by.

                                   BERU

                         Anakin?

                                   ANAKIN

                         Oh hey...

                             (Anakin stands)

                         Glad you you're not still sore.

                         You're not gonna believe it, I'm

                         having a real drink with a famous

                         pirate!

               Beru faints into the arms of the gunners.