I have gone back to the last entry of this screenplay and edited it. I added a new scene with Kirk & Spock between the Kirk/Scotty and mess hall scenes, and I also made some modifications to the mess hall scene itself, swapping Uhura for another character (The reasons why will be made clear in a future story.) and changing some of the characters' ranks.
Post #791877
- Author
- DuracellEnergizer
- Parent topic
- Star Trek: The Divergent Series (Ep. 1-1: "These Are the Adventures ...") *COMPLETE*
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/791877/action/topic#791877
- Date created
- 3-Oct-2015, 7:56 PM