Here is how I would order the romance flashback:

-Anakin and Padme arrive at Naboo (why they do doesn't need to be explained, the audience can fill in the blanks), but cut their convo about politics, and the meeting with the queen.

-They go to Padme's parents house, but not in Padme's room (that scene is cheesy).

-They have dinner (the floating pear scene).

-They walk to the lake pier, cutting "I don't like sand," and "I love the water."

-They kiss, but don't pull away, which fades into the next day.

-After their convo about Anakin's mother, we cut back to the present day.