I like the grouping and coloring of the X-Wings and TIEs, but not much else. Strutzan is a fine movie character artist (one sheets and novels), but everything is much too big.
On the small canvas of a novel, fine. On a film one-sheet, give the characters room to breathe. Pull back and give the design some landscape, some sense of scale. It's an adventure in outer space, not a dinner party.
I don't need to see every character. I need to feel the remote and vast setting.