initial feedback from my first skim is that it is a breath of fresh air to see a new approach, particularly the beginning, the transitions between episodes (transitions and fonts used for the '2 years later"), the removal of jar-jar (especially)
with that said, the end is always something i skip forward to when checking out a new prequel edit... i thought HanShotFirst's "Downfall of the Old Republic" had a really well edited obi-wan/anakin fight, particularly the very end (omitting the lava-raft fighting and the anakin's last jump were really well done)... L8twrtr's 'Dawn of the Empire' edit had a really well edited Vader Birth/Padme Death scene in my opinion...although i would love to see the full 'Vader on the operating table rising and then speaking to Palpatine' scene.. perhaps with altered dialogue and definitely no 'noooo' :)
... although i understand the approach in your edit, i feel like as it currently stands, the edits at the end are a bit choppy and jarring.. the audio is all over the place and there is too much back and forth. with a bit more work, i think this edit has A LOT of potential.. very exciting and the work is much appreciated. I will give it a closer watch tonight and get you some more constructive feedback.. :)