Thanks for the thoughts regarding the 'turn' scene. I'd still prefer for the line, "I will do whatever you ask," to be put back for the reasons I described. However, it's not really possible without some FX work that would not be worth doing. So, it'll have to remain as is. It just seems a little abrupt is all, but at least he isn't just saying he'll destroy the world to save one person.
I hope I don't sound facetious, but reinstating the original crawls would be a pretty easy task if you wanted to try it. I changed the names, as has become orthodox, to distinguish these edits from their source material. Anyone watching is properly informed that they are in for something different from Revenge of the Sith. Not that OCD, literal or figurative, can be overcome with logic, but it's an alternate version and carries a distinct title. I believe Jackpumpkinheadd has or was going to replace the opening crawls with the originals for his own preference.
Perhaps I can do something when Emanswfan releases his regraded prequels for me to use as a source, but I'm not going to promise anything. I certainly wouldn't advertise or release it, either way.