Nice job! But I thought: If you put Yan Solo, I guess you should change C-3PO to Z-6PO, shouldn't you (yep, French too)? But that said the text is really fine, just a few (infinitely minor) errors, but I'm a nitpicker, so... ;)

Errors like missing accents or typographic signs, no biggie: "Installez-vous" instead of "Installez vous", maybe "déspécialisée" instead of "déspecialisée" and "Étoile Noire" instead of "Etoile Noire". Also you wrote "Chewbacca Yan Solo, et les deux inoubliables etc.", maybe change that to "Chewbacca, Yan Solo et les deux inoubliables etc."?

Like I said I'm a grammar nitpicker, and I hope I don't come across as a pedantic ass**** trying to undermine what you did, which isn't what I wanted. I'm just trying to help :3