My votes about your grammar and orthography
- capitalisation at the beginning of a sentence, or after a full stop (.), exclamation mark (!) or question mark (?): 0/10
- capitalisation for persons, places etc. : 0/10
- I instead i for first person singular: 0/10
- comma (,), colon (:), semicolon (;) usage to separate different part of a phrase: 0/10
- full stop (.) at the end of a phrase: 9/10
- new line to start a new sentence: 10/10
- apostrophe in the right place: 10/10
- usage of different puncuations other than a full stop: 1/10
- brief title for a new thread: 0/10
(suggested by Joss Whedon, who has not an account here, yet)
Grammar is not the reason people is ignoring you... indeed, if someone has something interesting and constructive to say - even if not well written - he/she will receive more answers...
I
said
all
I
had
to
say
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(written intentionally FIY)