I already discussed this with justinvalorman via PM but I thought I'd share those ideas here also.
This is a rough cut of my idea to make Anakin work out how to destroy the Command Ship.
If it appeared unclear in the clip, the idea was to have Anakin fly through the West Hanger, straight through the half doughnut ship and out the East Hanger.
I'd personally lose the "Now this is podracing" line but this is great work. I have to assume someone has done something similar before, because in hindsight it seems such an obvious change, but I haven't seen it in any other edit (and I certainly didn't do it with my TPM edit).