Bingowings said:

The mock up visually makes sense to my eyes and doesn't take Artoo out of the main focus of the shot.

It's very much up to Ady what he does but it seems to make sense to me.

Yes, agree that this addition wouldn't distract from Artoo as the focus whatsoever.

The more I look at Ronster's mock-up, the more I like the idea of the engine turbine being added in a somewhat similar way to the shot. It just looks *right* to see it included it in the frame, and would make for a nice addition.

Unfortunately, as it might prove too tricky to *also* add a matching hint of it to the slightly closer, but very 'shaky' Artoo shots that come soon afterwards as the X-Wing enters the clouds/mist...then I'll happily accept it as being just 'offscreen'.