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BlueCardinal
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STAR WARS: EP V "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - 12GB 1080p MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE NOW
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12-May-2015, 2:49 PM

Monroville said:

If you want the focus to be the x-wing, here is an idea:

Being that most critters would flee away from something crashing into their quiet, tranquil swamp life, you should see creature flying away from the x-wing initially... The direction of the spider's movement would move towards the X-wing in the distance, as well as inflect a creature that had already hid itself from the X-wing crashing and now cautiously coming out to investigate.

This is the best way to revise Ady's current footage. Motion centers around the X-wing at the beginning of the shot and then spreads out, then the spider either starts moving or enters from the right of the frame. It is a natural reaction from the indigenous life and reduces the "distraction", though I am comfortable with it in its current form. Nice job, Ady; good suggestion, Monroville.