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DuracellEnergizer
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Episode I: A True Knight
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9-May-2015, 3:34 PM

Frey said:

I too was unsure about using the term Legate in the opening crawl. It's an unfamiliar (but real) word to most viewers, maybe Ambassador might be a better choice?

"Ambassador" probably would be a better choice. It has a flow to it, if you catch my meaning, which makes it an easy word to read. "Legate", on the other hand, is a harder-sounding word; it takes more mental effort for the reader to process it.