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I'm working on a PT rewrite to replace the Lucas prequels. I tried my best to focus on pre-1999 source material, but there is a character called Lord Maul, so I wasn't able to stick to that 100%. Below is the opening crawl and I should be able to crank out a summary of the first few scenes soon. Let me know how it sounds.
A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away...
STAR WARS EPISODE I: A TRUE KNIGHT
It is a period of total war.
Vengeful Clones, eliminating all opposition, have occupied the peaceful Kingdom of Alderaan, an esteemed ally of the Galactic Republic.
In the ensuing purge, dissident agents managed to escape the planet, intent on rallying the Republic Navy in support of their cause.
With the Clones poised to strike at heart of the Republic, Ambassador Marya Organa and General Obi-Wan Kenobi race to a nearby shipyard, determined to warn their superiors of the horde that threatens galactic peace...
EDIT: Changed "Legate" to "Ambassador".